I don't know what to say. I hadn't even thought of what might have happened if Ash didn't come back to life in the movie.

Very nice letter and alternate conclusion to the only pokemon movie I've actually watched...

10/10

That'd be an odd funeral.

"Hey, the kid in the box, he kinda looks like-"

"A STATUE YES WE KNOW SHUT UP NOW KTHX."

...Annd it wasn't Mewtwo who brought him back, it was the "Tears of OMG REVIVAL", but I like your idea better. It's less corny. -_-;;

wow that was great! i love this story! so much..

That song makes me think of the day my dog died,I never got to say didn't even wait for me,to come home,NO,not "home",this place,this house,it will NEVER be my home,NEVER!NOT AFTER WHAT THEY HAVE DONE! If only my tears could bring you back to me,just for a moment,so that I could say,I'm sorry Sitka,I'm sorry for breaking my promise,I am eternally you can see this,then I hope you can find it in your heart to forgive only,

NO! You killed Ash! beautiful story though

Aw . . . how sad . . .

(Blows nose)

AAMRL Forever!

this is very sad- couldnt he please still be alive?

It's so sweet. ::sniffles::

It made me feel mixed up inside.(happens alot.)

Aaawww! That's so kawaii and so sad! Me likes _

You probably know who I am. From reading the bad Pikachu fan fiction. It was like, oh I dunno how long ago, but it seemed a long time ago, that I wrote that fic. I'm sorry that it offended you or something, but I made that a really long time ago and I've tried to revise it, but seeing that I couldn't because I really didn't see it that way anymore, I stopped all tries and gave up. I know that a true author doesn't do that but at least you all know what my original feelings about all those situations were.

Oh yeah. You have a great story here! And agian, I'm so sorry about that fan fic. Just try my other fanfiction. You'll see how I have changed since the first season of Pokemon aired on TV.

Thanks for all your time in reading this.

Cooler from the account Muk and Grimer . The C Team

Ahh yes, I re-read and re-review your stories now. If only tears would bring back my old review that you must of deleted eh?

Very good though. Now that's what should of happened in the first Pokemon Movie and...um... yes

Not bad. Very well written. Only two problems:

1. I'm not a pokeshipper.

2. MEWTWO ROCKS!

Other than that, it was pretty good.

*sniffles*...so...sad! That was, like, SO majorly touching! I loved it!1