Aw! for a moment there I thought it was gonna be a JamesxMisty story but I guess not... oh well. I like it =3 very good story so far, not the slightest sign of OC, keep up the good job =^_^=

this is so cute, but u might do well to make them act a lil older..at 17 or 18, which i am,(yes people have informed me of my no lifeliness)i have sat on my boyfriends lap.falling on top of him is a normal occourence. Sleeping next to him is a normal occourance, Not something to blush about. But the thing with brock is funny,ur makin him a cute character. keep writin!

plz continue

I really liked your story so please rite more

this chapter was really funny. good job

CHAP 3 WAS SO FUNNY! UPDATE SOON!

oh my i have probably never had so mush fun reading a fanfic as i did with this one i really loved it so please dont stop continue writting this halleriusly romantic fan fiction

You so need to update! This is way too hillarious. Loved the whole 'getting ready for bed' scene.

Pretty good. You should get Misty to do the same thing

poor ash , that was imbaresing, and chapter three was gross, GET THE LEMON IN THERE

LOL I love it! Please dont put a lemon in it! Keep it romantic and funny and ill keep reading!

THAT WAS SO funny! I jus cant flame u!Keep it comin please? Wen u update e-mail me at Rustyrhode507 netscape.com

Write some more. I like it. Waiting to see what happens next.

Haah, what a funny story. I like it, keep on going! ^.^

Ahahahahahah! (tears in eyes) I'm sorry. I know i've already written a review for this chapter , but I just read it again b/c it's so damn funny! Hah Hah! Sorry...