aww, I really like this story and think that you did a good job with it.

Oh, how cute! I always like to read stories about little Allen and Mana. Sure, he's acting a little bratty here, but you can't really blame him much under the circumstances because he's still trying to learn how he should behave with others. Great little piece! ^_^

I just read those 2 fics by T-Phoenix123, before I read yours! Wow... Talk about irony... Really cute fic! I love Mana & Allen oneshots.

This fic is sweet! ^^

Very nice and sweet, even for a bratting Allen.
I would enjoy a longer version (a chaptered version) of Mana and Allen, if you wrote it.

Off to check out your other writtings.

Aw...so cute. Father-son relationships are so awesome. Write soon!
-RF