wow. that made me cry a bit. very sweet and sad story. i loved it! and i love the title: "I love you" in Chinese

Wow that was a beautiful one shot.. It actually cried.. Thanks for writing it :D

im a canto [cantonese] speaker too! sorta...
and u dunt have much mistakes,
but must naruto really die? TT~TT
and u'll eventually catch onto english,
but make sure u dunt forget canto!
or ur gunna be an epic failure, like me XD

Your story and your english is beautiful. Very heart wrenching at the end, perfect and such a good line! Great job!

so sad.
i loved it.
5*
great job.
*tears*

Gosh that was sad...
I only got to the second paragraph and I was like "gosh it feels like someone's gonna die" T_T
It is really well-written, but I think you can put in Naruto's fear and what he thinks will happen to him after the operation -it's only natural for donors to think 'bout that, no?
Hmm... Cantonese and Vietnamese; that's an unusual combination. My first language is Cantonese too ^^
I was scrolling through endless fics and suddenly your title caught my eye XD "我愛你" XD

Wow, how very nicely done, It's not too short nor too long
And the most important thing: It's a beatiful piece of work ;)

That made me cry...it wasn't long, but it definitely got the point across. T.T Great job.

it's not all that bad at all. there are so much worse fanfics out there, you have no idea
it was thoughtful, sad, hopeful
quite a read i must say
although they don't have the same blood types and there are so much more medical stuff to go through... ah, well, it doesn't matter
it's a really nice, short read
^^ very good job on this

This was...amazing. =] Nice job, seriously.

Woah dude this was insane.
It made me cry so easily. =(
Trust me stories don't make me cry this easily.
Well good job and I hope you can contuine,
Writing more wonderful stories.
Keep up the good work,
For I shall keep a eye on you. =D

I was really close to crying o_o

*starts to cry*

omg that was so SAD! T_T how...how...poor Sasuke...and Naruto =( This is a wonderfully heartbreaking story. You deserve 329857329095312/5 stars

Aw!I luv u Naruto!That is so sad. I am bursting with tears righ now. Please continue to write more stories like this.
I am viet too!!

*pokes* You might want to change the rating to T, or even K+. It's not M, and you might get more readers if it's T.

It was quite sad >