honestly can't wait.

cute

That was... weird. And disturbing. Honestly... good story though!

Cute and funny! nice. :))

Holy Siddhartha Gautama! I'll totally LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE! My dad if he got Natsume Hyuuga for my birhtday! WOO! But why exchange The Natsume Hyuuga for a red toy truck!?
Anyways, awesome story, and the dad is so Mikan's dad. He's a careless kinda person, awesome on the character personailties. UPDATE SOON! x]

ROFL OMG WHO WOULD CHANGE THAT HUNK FOR A TRUCK TOY?!?!?!!?!?!?!? damn u mikan and ur luck...btw nice story lol

LOL!

wow! getting natsume for your birthday! who doesn't want that?
well, mikan of course. hahaha!i'm getting crazy here, im answering my own questions!hahaha!!

this fic is so funny! my mom was like, "what the hell's happenin to you?" hahahaha!

ILOVEIT!!

Why would a teenage want a toy car...? But it does add more humor to the story. Nice sneak-peek of the next story.

Cute!
Update soon

Are they still young?

update

“-Thing!” ROFL. love that part.

i have so many lines here that i like that i cant even count em anymore (one of them being “Mikan, sweet heart. That’s not a pervert!”)


you have a way with words :)

i totally lol'd in this. eagerly waiting for your next chap :)

omg lol. xD
really cute and funny~ xD
one question though. :))
is Natsume a toy or something? o.O

onee-chan!
hihihihi! great start! hahaha! haven't heard from you for a long time, ne?
yay!
just try to update real soon, okay?
haha! Ja ne!

OK...first off. How did he BUY a boy. You know what? more important than that, what kind of father would buy a BOY for his daughter for her birthday? That is just kinda weird. And out of curiosity, how old are they?