Awww! SO they get their happy ending!

XD

I loved the plot line for the story

okay. this is my second review. anyways i REEEAAALLLLLYYYY LUUUVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVV your story! and now you can update! :) XD yay for me! XD

okay. ima review twice so that you have 25 reviews! ;) ha ha. lol. im sneaky... :)

Hmm, i love your story, you should continue. My guess for your contest is... wait i feel stupid...blue moon, and if you wanted to know...Shadowlands comes out November 17th. Keep writing! :)

Okay, I'm going to take a geuss at your contest. Hm... maybe the evermore movie is coming out?

:D

Update soon!

So...the old lady in the Graveyard was Ever's Mom?

:o

Is the Old Lady Ever?

um... I don't want to be mean, but u got the wrong seris. This spot is for the seris, also called The immortals, by Tamora Pierce. I notice that when i was looking for this one, i saw a seris w\ the smae name, but it had the author's name in it too, an i'd notice that this story u wrote was supposed to be in there.

/book/Immortals_series_Alyson_Noel/

This the one i think you want.

Sorry if i sounded controling.

i love this story

i love the immortals series and i do think you should bring damen into the book. but anyway i like this story and can't wait for you to update!

Like it. Not the best not lovin it

Did you even read the books?

Ally3

Awesome Love it so far update soon!

This is an AMAZING story! You have to keep on writing!... PLEASE post the rest when you have finished it. I can't wait to find out what happens! You are a awsome writer! Good luck with the story! :) :)

so the lady at the beginning is her mother... AHA!