|Reviews for sanctuary|
| Snarry Potter 12/1/12 . chapter 36
i loved this story if there is an upsate or sequel please send me the link to it thank you
| amata0221 10/10/12 . chapter 36
Great story, hope you will update soon.
| TheBlackRose 4/14/12 . chapter 1
One simple word...AMAZING!
| tacaloking 11/3/11 . chapter 1
i like this story it has a good plot
| OwlNebula 11/3/11 . chapter 34
Seriously love this story. I have no idea how I stubbled onto this, but I'm glad I did.
| invisible-gurl 10/30/11 . chapter 32
uhhhh did you update chapter 34 again?
| invisible-gurl 10/24/11 . chapter 34
oh flipping hell... o.O edward's remembering! yay! but crap... voldy's found out about them and wants them... dammit alex! get a vision or something with that mind link... edward totally needs you right now! T_T great job and plz update soon
| TheCynicReads 10/21/11 . chapter 2
I can't reply to your PM until tomorrow because I just joined FFnet, but thank you for being so rational about it. I'm trying to be less harsh with my reviews: I criticize myself very harshly and I am also a firm believer that honesty is the best policy, so I hope you don't take what I have to say personally.
This chapter, whilst it does contain canon characters, was a little overdone as a death scene. I did like the plot twist that Bella died from Renesmee - that surprised me.
Grammar and spelling is okay; ellipses (...) only have three full stops; and the reason why the death scene seemed so overdone was due to the stammering. Also, you really didn't need to state the obvious about her being in pain: show your readers, don't tell them. Stories read better that way.
I hope you continue to improve. :)
| TheCynicReads 10/21/11 . chapter 1
This is bad. Your OC is a Mary Sue. I'm sorry to have to tell you this, but no one wants to read your Self-Insert fantasy. Aside from this, your grammar is bad. It is inconsistent all the way through, with you missing capitalisations in almost every paragraph. That is the only major reoccuring fault that I can find. Your spelling is okay, however. The plot and the OC are the main problems here.
| Theta-McBride 10/17/11 . chapter 33
Oooohh! I need to read the next chapter! Please finish it!
| anani 9/19/11 . chapter 33
Please write kore! :)
| invisible-gurl 9/16/11 . chapter 33
poor edward... well i guess she can erase his memories but she definitely can't erase the feelings in his heart P great job and plz update soon i almost feel sorry for bella . lol
| Mouth 7/27/11 . chapter 33
oh i feel soooo sorry for edward
| Aero 3 7/27/11 . chapter 33
I, too, cried when I watched the movie and my friends laughed at me lol
Im glad that you update this.. trust me when I say I miss your story alooot
| Guest 4/1/11 . chapter 32
I miss your story :D thanks for updating