this story is REALLY good you should update. its incredible.

Interesting... Wonder what I did?

um...

why would he die? i mean... what did he do to make his conscience like that!?

though, i pretty much like to see Artemis die even once.

I cant believe I didnt do this early, though I did favorit it. I really like it so far, and I'm dieing to know what the heck Artemis did to get the death sentence.

PLEASE NO! NOT A CLIFFHANGER!

Don't be afraid to kill Artemis if you need to, a character death can always give a climax. Someone unexpected if you want, like Foaly after a botched rescue attempt? Maybe all the LEP protagonists commit treason and are given the death penalty? A mass execution of all the main characters would be shattering to the reader. Whatever you do please remember to write a sequel, go through the emotions of the surviving characters and how they react to the theoretical character death.

JUST IDEAS, NO PRESSURE TO TAKE THEM. THEY ARE ONLY THERE AS TOKENS OF MY RESPECT FOR THIS STORY!

I like it. Good so far. But, I must wonder, what crime did he commit?

he chose the three weeks.

*sighs* update soon, alright?,
brittney

The story sounds interesting but I don't want Artemis to die.

NO! You can't kill Artemis! What did he do?

MOanS...I HATE cliffhangers...okay so I know he won't chose to die immediately...RIGHT? hey...I like this story a lot...A millions of brownie points to u just cause it looks like a H/A fic..yay...Even if they are so illogical and will never work out together I love this pair...Wish Eoin's fairie elves were like Tolkiens'...Sigh

What did he pick? *Sigh* It makes me sad. I think you should write a bit more, although I would understand if you didn't. Anyway, that was sad. I feel like crying now. Nice little one-shot.

But what did he do?!

Great story, so far. Please continue soon!

~HMF

Wonderful! PLEASE write more very very soon! I can't imagine what my dear, sweet Arty would do that would deserve death! But I do hope he chooses to live, and I really hope he spends most of his time with Holly!! And one more thing- HOW IN THE HECK CAN YOU KILL ARTEMIS? That is all. lol, but seriously... he's so amazing!
Ah well, please update soon before the possible conlusions torture me! Oh wait, too late they already have! No!
Keep writing!
XoXo Northern Grunge oXoX

honestly can't see Artemis agreeing to execution, his survival instinct is far too strong, any stronger and it would outweigh the death instinct (thats the instinct which causes people to age), also technically 3 weeks and theres a high chance he could create an antidote or antivenom.

In other words conscience or no conscience he wouldn't agree to execution

This story is amazing, I'm hooked and it's only the first chapter :) please continue soon! I love the way you write Artemis, and it looks like the plot is going to be just as good. Thanks for writing this ;)