 withoutaim 2009-04-06 . chapter 1Now when you're back with a new story I just, had the crazy urge to review. (Even though I suck at it, oh well.)
This is wonderful. You create a bittersweet atmosphere that is easy to imagine and even though I thought it was kind of veiled, you understood what was going on.
The last line and the first "section" really got to me sonehow, I don't really know why but it was something about it that just hit me. The entire last & first section and, all the sections really, hahah.
Anyways, wonderful piece. You never fail to not deliver something that takes my breath away in some way, honestly.
No, now I'm off, there is nothing more I can say actually. I'm not good when it comes to this like I've said so, I'll end my sucky review here.
Very happy for the little "come back",
hope you're doing well in college (I reckon I heard you mention that you were going there in a PM, I think? (:)
/Hanna |
 Sensory Overload 2009-03-23 . chapter 1Favorited! I don't know why, but I found myself particularly attracted to this fic. Your descriptive wording is beautiful and I loved how it kinda had a pattern, well, at least I saw one. I thought it was sad, but beautiful all the same. I always enjoyed your stories! |