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Reviews for: Atmosphere in Saline
withoutaim
2009-04-06 . chapter 1
Now when you're back with a new story I just, had the crazy urge to review. (Even though I suck at it, oh well.)

This is wonderful. You create a bittersweet atmosphere that is easy to imagine and even though I thought it was kind of veiled, you understood what was going on.

The last line and the first "section" really got to me sonehow, I don't really know why but it was something about it that just hit me. The entire last & first section and, all the sections really, hahah.

Anyways, wonderful piece. You never fail to not deliver something that takes my breath away in some way, honestly.

No, now I'm off, there is nothing more I can say actually. I'm not good when it comes to this like I've said so, I'll end my sucky review here.

Very happy for the little "come back",
hope you're doing well in college (I reckon I heard you mention that you were going there in a PM, I think? (:)
/Hanna
Sensory Overload
2009-03-23 . chapter 1
Favorited! I don't know why, but I found myself particularly attracted to this fic. Your descriptive wording is beautiful and I loved how it kinda had a pattern, well, at least I saw one. I thought it was sad, but beautiful all the same. I always enjoyed your stories!
Bubblegum Head
2009-03-22 . chapter 1
I will always love your stories.
Static Lull
2009-03-21 . chapter 1
I liked this. A lot.
Particularly, the first section.
(and the title but that's another story).
I've only got a very vague grasp of what is going on, but it's love nonetheless.
13loves8loves9loves6
2009-03-21 . chapter 1
oh man~ how sad poor Rox u like how you described Axel though~ with the dimples haha the last couple parts were crazy
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