great story. especially that last part between leez and kasy

That was quite amusing. Although, I'm wondering about what would happen on that date. Of course, it's not in the main story, but it'd still be entertaining. As it is, I was kind of expecting Kim and Shego to end in a tie, due to the simple fact that they're both overly competitive and I was interested in seeing what they'd do for a tie breaker or just declare that both sides of the bet had to be paid up or something. Anyway, thanks for posting all of this. It was quite amusing to see.

Very cute way to end the story with Kasy recounting the story to a prospective date. The dangers of being great at something, makes a person think literally be great at everything else with just the barest of training. Both women thinking they are all that on golfing while the truth is that they are still begginners.

Read you later!

The twins prefer miniature "gold"? I like my gold full-sized, thank you.

Loved the bit about Kasy and Liz at the end. I think it's awesome the way you weave the pieces of everyone's life into your tapestry.

This was a fun little snapshot of Kim/Shego and of Kasy as well.

Alex

Well the ending was something that I was NOT expecting... Kasy is one... one girl with an atitude, XD and that is saying something.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.

Nice build-up to yet another struggle between those two who do so deserve each other. Funny as always, and with such naturally flowing dialog from everyone. Killigan was perhaps my favortie.

This Chapter is more like Tiger vs. Phil. So who would win the green jacket? Or in this case...the green skirt?

Keep it KP real

Captain IT

KiY, were you spying on me when I golfed? I don't recall ever telling you about the mud incident! :P You have captured just about every experience I've ever had on a golf course.

I wasn't expecting the bit at the end. Totally awesome! So it was all a tale told for the benefit of a friend, huh? (Or should I say, eh?) I think I like that. Of course Kasy is likely to pick up relationship ideals of her own. While Kim and Shego are role models, any child of theirs would be an independent.

Why do I have the odd feeling that Elizabeth's parents are stodgy conservative types?

Who is Elizabeth?

You had my interest piqued KiY-sama!

I've been reading original lesbian fictions for a while as I think I burn myself on fanfiction .net and only those in my alert list are the ones I read for the moment.

Then while reading this, I thought, if the names of the characters were changed, BE universe would have been a good uber-original fic. Ne KiY-sama, do you write original fics too? If you do...do you post it and if yo do where do you post it? Hehehehe

I'm certainly curious as to where this is going to lead. Especially since this would be a horrendous place to end the fic. Although, I kinda wonder what else you've got in store for Kim and Shego. As well as how well you're going to let Kim and Shego become or if this is just a little phase for them to go through for Shego's job. But it certainly looks like it'll be quite entertaining. And I hope to see more soon!

Intriquing story. Hitting and chasing a ball around a course isn't a sport that I'd associate with Kim and Shego, but then why would they go on a busman's holiday?

Chortle...

Some day, the earth is going to be reduced to a blasted cinder, or flung into an alternate universe or turned inside out...and it will probably be shego and Kim competing over something. Love this story.

Ah, putt-putt golf.

Get a hole in one when the light the same color as your ball was on and win a free game!

Holy moley, Kim the one playing less than savory tactics to get a leg up. Living all these years with a excriminal has left her a bit more flexible on working with criminals. At least for sport practice.

Read you later!