O! Hope you update soon; this is fantastic! Love the arguing going on. >]

I'm not usually a RikuxAxel fan, but this story does interest me. You should continue it. BTW, could I add this to my community?

Yay! This is even better than the first version! It has humour and angst and all sorts of secrety-hinty-stuff that I makes me wish there were dozens more chapters already, plus it's extremely well written. I'll be looking forward to reading it.

Update soon, please?!

lololol. i love the re-written version of this~! it's completely hysterical and it establishes more of a concrete base for the story to build on.

they're such a counter-productive family. it's AWESOME. i thoroughly enjoyed the spoon-throwing and exchange of insults. just pure AWESOME, man.

i'm still giggling to myself. that was HILARIOUS. i love it~! and i can't wait for more. (:

This is really good. I like the way the food fight seemed to take place with Cloud or Tifa really getting involved with it and the way no one seems to have drawn a connection to Riku's glass dropping pattern.

Definitely interested to see where this goes. Very different beginning from the first version.
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I'm glad you decided to rewrite this and stuff. i like it so far.

Damn, I don't know which first chapter I like the most; the one from the previous story, or this one.

Hi!
OMG, your writing is awsome! Your story is really funny, still very "serious". I really liked it, special the part with the throwing spoon... :D
Keep it up, I'll be glad if you write a new chapter; I'll definitely read it.
(sorry about the spelling, if it's wrong please look past it... english is not my mother toung... :P)

take two? XD it's a good second start methinks... /lots/ of family interaction, rather than scene skips... i enjoyed the male bonding angle.. XD but, are we gonna see the scene where riku met axel? cuz it must've already happened, having riku dislike him already, right?

anyway, i enjoyed it immensely and was quite amused... *grins* see you next chapter i suppose! ^^

i like this a lot so far. i'm really excited to see where you go with it.