yeah, i also read this story quite a while back XP using phones for this really doesn't work when u want to review . moving on, i think u've become one of my fave authors now XD ur dark way of writing really captures my attention very much like extrinsical's stories does. i think this was great considering it came out of nowhere XD

As people have said, this is Angst, not Drama. There is a fine line between the two and you've clearly crossed it.

That said I really enjoyed it although it is a downer... then again I'am used to it, since almost everyone that writes angst for this series takes the "Nanoha death" route.

I think this leans a bit more towards angst than drama, but it was well written nonetheless.

God, I've chain-read so many NanoFate fics in the last two days I think the emotional impact has started to deaden my nerves...

Ah well, I'll live.

So...sad. But good at the same time. Nice job.

uhm, can you explain what is this all about, cause im kinda confused,sorry. *laugh sheepishly that...if you wouldn't mind.

Just a little odd, Fay? Well. Your odd moods always get us the best fics, so good job.

Nanoha died - -..

Geez - -...

However, Your story is very interesting.

Kind of strange. Different style than what you usually use.

Good all the same. I'm guessing Nanoha's description of what she feels like when she's not with Fate are her wounds, or something.

Well. That's what it felt like, anyway.

Oh...this was...pretty intense. Sort of shocking. Something was obviously wrong, but...I didn't expect this. Great job.

DX Eli. You're a B itc h. I can't believe this.

Otherwise. It was killer. :D

Sad, and somehow...very powerful. Poignant, I should say.

Nice job.

Fuck, man. That's the shit, right there. Amazing.

It took me by surprise. Like, comepletely. Very powerful.

i thought it was just going to be a freakin' monologue or something...

Was dead, wow.

you killed off Nanoha in this one-shot but, it's great stuff actually. It reminds me of the song Say by John Mayer.

"it's better to say too much than never to say what you need to say..."

just a random thought :)

-tami

That was powerful, for such a short fic... well, I guess I should have read it a couple of days ago.

Poor Nanoha... not realising that she's dead. I love it when fics grow organically like this one did.