So...sad. But good at the same time. Nice job.

uhm, can you explain what is this all about, cause im kinda confused,sorry. *laugh sheepishly that...if you wouldn't mind.

Just a little odd, Fay? Well. Your odd moods always get us the best fics, so good job.

Nanoha died - -..

Geez - -...

However, Your story is very interesting. ^^

Kind of strange. Different style than what you usually use.

Good all the same. I'm guessing Nanoha's description of what she feels like when she's not with Fate are her wounds, or something.

Well. That's what it felt like, anyway.

Oh...this was...pretty intense. Sort of shocking. Something was obviously wrong, but...I didn't expect this. Great job.

DX Eli. You're a B itc h. I can't believe this.

Otherwise. It was killer. :D

Sad, and somehow...very powerful. Poignant, I should say.

Nice job.

**, man. That's the **, right there. Amazing.

It took me by surprise. Like, comepletely. Very powerful.

i thought it was just going to be a freakin' monologue or something...
Was dead, wow.
you killed off Nanoha in this one-shot but, it's great stuff actually. It reminds me of the song Say by John Mayer.
"it's better to say too much than never to say what you need to say..."
just a random thought :)
-tami

That was powerful, for such a short fic... well, I guess I should have read it a couple of days ago. >>

Poor Nanoha... not realising that she's dead. I love it when fics grow organically like this one did.

wtf, i got so confused when Signum showed up but then i understood.

You know that was quite the twister. I thought that it was Fate who was dead, but that would be too simple wouldn't it. I can't believe it was Nanoha. Now I just want to know what happened, because I'm almost as confused as Nanoha. Goodness the ending was so sad. Jeez, too many angsty stories in a row. Fluff! That's what we all need right now, a good dose of fluff.

Oh very sad...first I thought Fate was in a coma but it turned out that Nanoha is actually a spirit talking to her. :(