I hope that there is a descion made about beetlepaw. I feel bad for him-all he was trying to do was save her from the foxes and the fox killed her but he got blamed for it

I really like it! Beetlepaw doesn't seem that bad... but i really don't know.

Isn't Ravenflight supposed to be an elder if Sandstorm's already one. Liking it so far.

Well, I think Beetlepaw is innocent. I also play guitar, and I hate The Song All Summer Long. Why does BAB play it so much? that just annoys me! Anyway, is skyclan going to the gathering or Am I getting the wrong idea? And this takes place after sunrise?

Yet another great chapter... I also like Milliefeather, Milliecloud, or Millietear as my suggestions for Millie.

I'm guessing I need to read another story first... I going to try and find it now.

Um, so Hollyleaf, Lionblaze, and Jayfeather were never born? Or did they all die? Uh... okay...

how about calling millie Fogfur or Mistyfog? i dunno they kinda suit her.

Ooh, very interesting. Looks like a certain Ravenflight likes a certain Stormblaze. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Wow, I didn't expect that. Please update as soon as you can and sorry for taking so long to review.
~Blaze~

And also... i think it would be better if it was like the prologue where it switches between Heathertail, Ravenflight, Mousewhisker and the 3. it should change POV's like evry other chapter.

I like it so far, i read cruel season too! The only part i dont like about this story is that you make the part with beetlepaw too much like a human. It sounded like an actual "Court of Law" Case.

Wow nice job, this is great. If you owned warriors it would be just as good as it is now, maybe even better. Keep up the awsome work.

no! echosong has been killed! which cat did that gresome and terrible deed?

This is getting good so far. Please update soon, I can't wait to see where this story is going.
~Blaze~