Ahhhh I loved this! Fluffy tiva is always lovely to read and you had just the right amounts of seriousness embedded in it! Gonna go read your other stories now :)

i loved it it was very very very very funny

WoW this is really a wonderful story. And how profound you were to include mention of a 'bomb' going off...hummmmm...like you almost know something...

So glad I found this story - I wish this is how it would go on the show - but alas it will not you are right about that ... You write Tony so very well...the bear claw and the you kissed me first are so very Tony - Well Done !

This story is perfect - sensual, romantic and funny.

Mmm...fluff is good :)

Ahhhh I love this story. It's really true to the characters, and the writing is really witty and amusing. Well done!

Wow!

That was amazing!

Probably one of my favorite Tiva oneshots.

You captured the characters so perfectly.

They tease one another and drive each other crazy, but they feel things so deeply.

Wish the writers of NCIS would take a story like this into consideration.

LOVE IT:):):):) I especially liked Ziva telling Tony that he's her best friend. Cuz it's TOTALLY TRUE:):):):)

:) very sweet

hahahaha this is good it's funny and it's just awesome hahaha you should write a sequel and make it a few chapters ;P

I really enjoyed reading this, and I can't wait to see what else you come up with. Well written, I loved it.

I love fluff, and this is a patently wonderful bit of it! I agree, I always stress over the littlest typo or line I feel like I messed up. But don't worry, this story is excellent. Adding to favs!

. . . . . . . 're an amazing writer,and that's a for sharing and giving me such enjoyment!I'll be looking out for your works...

This was very sweet and satisfying. And you're right, never something we will ever see on the show(sigh), which makes it all the more fun to read. I'm loving travelling through your stories. Please keep writing.

lol. this would make a great opener. please make a sequel.