Oh oh, run Hana run. Run like the dickens, good fic.

YAY for ByakuHana! The beginning is great! Byakuya is so Byakuya here, poor Hana, and Renji for being dragged into this! Well I hope you UPDATE really soon, I'd like to know where this is going!

WRITE MORE NOW!
wonder how Renji will handle the news?

cute but you need a little more length kk can't wait for more

Pls continue, loved it so much read it twice!

Poor Byakuya I hope he will find out soon that it is not a prank and Hanatarou doesn't get into to much trouble or hurt. Please update soon!

I love your KuyaHana, so I hope read more.

Kisses from Argentina!

yeah i like it.
who cares about the beta- it's fine as long as we can understand what u mean (and i guess we can)(although i myself am not good with english either so i may not be the right critic (my spelling is wrong too)). what matters is the story but if you do get beta i won't mind. yust continue with the chapters.