Aw what a great end to this fantastic story. I am really sorry that the story has ended but you did a great job. Thank you very much for this great read. I will look forward in the future to reading more of stories that you have wrote.

Ok just finished from Chapter 6 to 11. These cliff hangers are the end are killing me. You are a great writer and so far this story has been just wonderful. Unfortunately I have to get some sleep now because I have to work in the morning, but come lunch time me and my cell phone will be back on the internet trying to get a few more chapters written. Great Job!

Like the chapter? I loved it. You have everyone nailed down, including Jenny and Mike Franks. I have never smiled and laughed so much as I did just reading this chapter. Thank you for the wonderful story so far and I look forward to reading more chapters.

Great job!

Gah, stupid Mikel, but yay! He's dead! :D

Nice story! Love the ending! It's been great following along with this fic!

I loved this!

great job.

LOL. Loved the chapter and the fact that even though the plot has been used a lot in fanfic to get Gabby together that it isn't being used in the usual way and that Abby is standing up for herself and taking care of herself. Also loved the character interaction because it's true to character. The dialouge was dead on

That was a great story, I can't wait to see what happens next.

Awesome twist! Great job with that!

I love how Gibbs told Tony to tell Abby that he loved her, and how Jenny had a feeling that he loved her anyway. :D

Wonderful job!

I'm sitting on edge here waiting for another chapter!

I love it and keep it up. _

very very well written

Another excellent chapter. Nicely done with the small doses of humor mixed in with the drama. Not so patiently waiting for the next update. I can't help it, I'm hooked on this story.

Cliff hangers are great for the story, but OMG how I hate them. You are evil to make us wait for the updates. Evil, I say! But that's what makes a great story, so I thank you for that.

This is my favorite chapter so far! Very well written! :D

Great job! I love the bit about Ziva's driving, haha

Gah, Mikel! I hope he dies! No, not that, that would put him out of his misery! It needs to be slow, and painful! Gibbs knows just how to administer that punishment! Muhahaha! *Ahem*

Anyway, like I said before, great work! Can't wait for another one!

Abby's gonna kill Gibbs, never mind Mikel Mawher.