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excessivelyperky
2009-05-17 . chapter 9
Yay! I think you mean he got a medal around his neck, not a metal. But it's still great that Snape can start a new life now. And with faith, hope and Charity.
excessivelyperky
2009-05-12 . chapter 8
Yes, there are few things worse than a bored Severus!
excessivelyperky
2009-05-07 . chapter 7
It's spelled 'incest'--although Snape _could_ point out that a spot of Muggle blood had to help all those pure blood lines, mind you (and then duck as Narcissa tries to swat him).

Nice chapter.
excessivelyperky
2009-05-01 . chapter 6
Yes, I wished that Ron would have played more chess in the books--but I'm glad that he helped distract Snape from everything with the quality of his play. You know Severus is going to work on his game till Ron is sweating bullets.

Good chapter!
yellow 14
2009-04-23 . chapter 9
Proof of the adage, never argue with a woman. A nice wrap up, keep updating
grugster
2009-04-20 . chapter 9
Oh, it's already finished. :( What a shame. I really loved this story, but you know this already.
And of course I loved the end as well, especially the last words of Taylor. ;)
Thank you very much for writing this Alastor/Poppy/Severus friendship story!
grugster
2009-04-18 . chapter 8
Like I said before a good soap-washing of his mouth would do him well.
I like the cheeky side of Severus you showed with Poppy.
Please update soon!
grugster
2009-04-18 . chapter 7
Oh, I forget to tell you in the last review how wonderful I found the idea with the bath. It was great!
And again I loved Molly in this chapter and Severus was quite civil to Alastor. That makes me happy. :)
grugster
2009-04-18 . chapter 6
Thanks for letting Molly appear again. You know I love her.
I swear I would really like to wash Severus' mouth with soap when he calls Alastor a pervert and ugly. How can he be so superficially and rude? I hope he will see how much Alastor cares for him soon and stop saying things like this to him.
The chess game was interesting. Do you plan to have the twins in this story as well?
Good chapter! Thanks forwriting it!
yellow 14
2009-04-16 . chapter 8
Seeing Severus prank Sirus was really funny. And the banter between Severus and Moody was very good. Keep updating
attyfan
2009-04-14 . chapter 8
Annoying one's caretakers is a common reaction to feeling helpless -- and Moody probably would handle helplessness about as well as Severus.
yellow 14
2009-04-11 . chapter 7
Hey he's still recovering, so of course he isn't doing much. (Although I'm betting he's getting restless. He does strike me as the type of man who likes to be doing something useful.) Keep updating.
attyfan
2009-04-10 . chapter 7
So everyone else should be resting, too -- but don't rest too long before updating, please.
excessivelyperky
2009-04-09 . chapter 5
Neat chapter! I like the way you're having things turn out. Severus deserves to be loved.
excessivelyperky
2009-04-09 . chapter 4
Now, I really like the idea of bribing Harry with telling him things about his mother whenever he did good in Potions. I bet that would have worked, once he figured it out (ok, he would have whined to Ron for a little bit over it, but he would have sucked it up anyway after that).

I'm horribly jealous of people who can eat like that and still not gain weight, though.
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