err...just so you know, Renji is over 500 years old.

Okay, now it's getting good. I can't wait to see their reaction to Renji's bankai. Please hurry with the next part!

Wahh a kiss from Kama!! (dies happy) hehe Nelis doesn't have to worry, I know Kama is all hers! hehe

I can totally understand why Zhai would want to keep Renji. I mean I want to lock him in a closet...so... heheh Though I do feel bad for the poor man. He just keeps digging himself deeper and deeper into a hole with Zhai in the beginning! I think he may need a hug (nodnod)

Did I mention I love Kama? You gave me a nice dose of him this time and I'm glad. It's nice to see his relationship with Renji grow. I have no doubt Renji will go to him in the future for more Warder questions, and I have no qualms about reading it hahah. Poor Kama though, when Renji mentions marriage I want to hug the big dude. I do hope Nelis gives the poor man what he wants eventually. I am proud of Renji though for not having a mental breakdown at the news of submitting to Zhai!

Ahh Nelis is a pervert! HA!

Unohana is a SNEAK! I'm not sure if I like her. I don't much like her sugar coated evil that she pulls. But I think you write her well either way. She is a cruel cruel lady. I do like how you changed Renji's saying, the one you picked fits him better. (nodnod) And I like how you ended the chapter! Though I don't like to be left hanging!! Mwhahah I can't wait for more! (bounces)

yay!! an update! great chapter. can't wait for the next one :) please make it soon!

Great chapter. They're a little reckless assuming that they can thrust Renji, but otherwise they have started to realize that they have to be very careful.

I've asked ealier about when this takes place. I just figured it out by rereading the first chapter, consitering that Aizen still has his glasses. In that note, I take back what is said about central 46.

Does this take place before or after the Soul Sociaty invasion arc. The reason why I'm asking is if this is after, then all of central 46 is dead, and Captain Comander Yamamoto is currently enforcing the laws and acting as judge and jury. It's not a big deal, but the reason that I'm mentoning this is that you mentened central 46 in your story.

Magnifique. Once again you have succeeded in captivating me and causing me to dread reaching the end of the page. I wait the next chapter with great anticipation.

I, personally, like your Unohana! Though...as you know...no one will beat KAMA! haha Nelis is one stubborn woman... I LIKE HER! hahah... Bya is a bastard...

I can't think of anything new to say that I haven't SPEWED all in your email hahah! I can't wait to see Zhai wake up - and eat all the food. (My black hole is kinda jealous). I'll patiently await the next installment of this story!!

Good chapter. I hope that Zhai awakens soon. Where is Rukia at this point: on Earth, or still around in the soul society?

yay you finally updated!! i've been looking forward to an update of this story since i read it. can't wait for the next one :) please make it soon!

Kama...OVERLOAD!~

WAH why does Renji & Zhai's first true meeting have to be so sad :( I liked Tia, I'm still not sure if I completely forgive you for that death!! :( Heh, just messing!

As always a wonderful chapter... I always find myself rereading your stories when I have spare time. You OC's are always wonderfully written and they have a way to grow on the reader. But I will NOT share Kama with anyone! [besides Nelis - since he's hers really -.-]

You and you 'nitpicking'... maybe I should do some of that... my stories may come out as amazing as yours! hah!~ (tackles)

Great chapter. I would have expected Nelisande to be a little more careful around the locals, especially concerning the 'child' word, still the stress of the situation makes it forgivable.

Very well written. You surprise me. I enjoyed it immensely and await the next chapter with anticipation.

A good start and doesn't seems as forced as Color of Trust.
It's a good call to not reveal everything at start, and let the characters try to figure things out. I also like that you avoided making your OC:s too 'special'.
I'm looking forward to seeing more.