That was cute Peeper.

It was nice to wake up in the morning and read a new chapter. I like how you ended chapter 11. I can just see that scene in my head. It also reminds me of a few times that have Bogg chasing after Jeffrey at the end of an episode. Hee hee hee.

Definately intriguing fic...

Another great chapter Peeper. I am sure that the next one will be a good one as well.

You are very welcome Peeper. Just keep them coming okay... Just love your stories, Morgans and Jakes as well.

Great job!
Too bad it's coming to an end soon. Oh well it just means you'll be working on more stories for us to read.

I think erased our email addys in our messages. I didn't get yours, either. Maybe if I put it in an different way it will come through?

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Anyway, I hate to put anything in your "review" section, but, your PM is disabled. (re-able it if the email address doesn't come through this time?)

I love X-Men, too! However, I was thinking something more dramatic... I had a bit of an idea for the first chapt; figured we could take turns doing chapters?

Another great chapter Peeper.

I'm glad Jeffrey has such great friends. Great chapter PEEPS. I'll be waiting patiently for next chapter.

Hey great job peeps. I can't wait to read more. Keep da chapters coming!

Another great chapter Peeper. Can't wait for chapter 8 looks like it is getting good now... LOL.

Hello - Peeper, I also share Omnifanatic's thoughts. You have some good skills and as always cool ideas but you are rushing through your stories failing to develop some good story lines. I must agree with Omnifanatic regarding Bogg's behavior. I simply can not see him leaving Jeff to go eat nor can I see him worrying about a test when Jeff's mere survival is at risk. (Although it is your story not mine but I think you are a better writer than that)
-Take your time we will wait to read your work- believe me when you take your time it is so worth it.
You have great potential!

Another great chapter Peeper. Can't wait for the next one...

I've been trying to follow along with this and I think you have created some very good themes, Jeffrey's maturation into adulthood, going into Voyager Training school, getting drugged by school enemies, etc. However, I can't wrap my head around the silliness of it all. For example, in this chapter, Bogg can't sit with his unconscious son for 5 minutes, before he has to eat lunch? But he can pace around 5 hours while he takes a test? Not to mention, the boy was just badly drugged and woken from his stupor and has to immediately take this monster exam?? No time to recover?
I have read most of the stories on here, including the Interview with a Voyager, Macen was Jeffrey's enemy when he was 20 years old, you make that quite clear, now he's only 17 and they talk about her like she's an OLD enemy? Are you following my logic? Because you mixed up your own series.
The theme here, in my mind, is Jeffrey's assimilation into Voyager school, which has so much potential to be a fantastic story. However, you breeze over everything! There is no detail on the classes, the teachers, coursework or this grueling exam. I can't imagine anything. And what happened to Roger? Now it's all about Macen. Her motives for hurting Jeffrey are not clear, since in the Interview she and Jeff became friends and she was sorry she hurt him then.
You may see this review as all negative,but I had to point out these incongruities that consistently appear in your stories.

Great chapter and it was nice and long, just da way I like it. Keep up the great work. I love the ending to chapter 7, made me giggle. Too bad someone is missing out on a great story. Well I guess ya win some you lose some.