you very well captured the views between light and dark in a way understandable, and for that you should be commended, I relize that your story is a few weeks old and I'm sorry I didn't discover it sooner it is wonderful

You need to write more. More! MORE!

...that was my moment of insanity. But really, you spin these intimate scenes really well. You should write a story based on every relationship (whether friendship, romance, family, enemy, etc.). If you have time.

Ha! I love the ending. The whole thing, really: it's deep in a nice easy fashion. Great job!

...XDD; Ok, it seems the rest of my review was cut off, but I was basically saying it's awesome that you like Digimon now too, =) and that this story was very well written! Which is very great because we seriously need more Digimon goodfic, haha! Digimon is a wonderful show and I'm so glad you like it now. Keep up the great work!! ~Hikari

OH MY GOSH you like Digimon now too?!? Yay! You are awesome!

It's great how you write so clearly.

This fic made me giggle _a_n_d think. A rare combination.
I love how it explores the similarities and differences between Ken and Kari, their relationship and Ken's mind.
It's all good.

And btw, the uncreative chapter title fits this well, so shush.

Uh-maze-ing.
:)
And cute too, actually.
Keep up the good work.