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Gin no Hitomi
2009-10-24 . chapter 13
No!! More chappies! Update please? *eyes that would make a puppy jealous*
No seriously. Please update?

Thanks,

You're loving fan that will probably use some of your ideas in the story to cover Allen's past in their own story. (Ya can't sue me!)
RebelFlame
2009-10-21 . chapter 13
Um...some typos but I don't have time to point them out. SORRY! *working on project* Great chapter, thought this was how Mana was going to kick the bucket there for a second. Update soonish!
-RF
xdevil-childx
2009-10-21 . chapter 13
i really like this story so updaet soon please
Anne Camp aka Obi-quiet
2009-10-20 . chapter 13
"black whole" should be "black hole".

I'm wondering why the Akuma is helping them...it doesn't make sense to me.
Kiarra-Chan
2009-10-20 . chapter 13
I was getting ready to cry when Mana almost died... TT^TT I'm so glad you updated! I didn't see ANY typos either!
authorwithissues
2009-10-20 . chapter 13
yeah, now that i think about it, you do tend to abuse them, dont you? but, i dont think its anything too incredible, the abuse i mean. some people just go CRAZY and pervy to the max. i like yours much better than those ones. your abuse is much more realistic (is it just me or does this make me sound like some sort of sadist??)
Beyond The Dream
2009-10-20 . chapter 13
This is awesome.. I got all worried for Allen, but he's okay! Then I got worried for Mana...but then he got better!! Then I realized something. Mana dies. Crap. Ah..I don't want it to happen...



Anyways, your updating makes me very happy! Thanks a bunch for a wonderful chapter!
xdevil-childx
2009-10-07 . chapter 12
this is really good and i hope that you update soon
signrain
2009-09-01 . chapter 12
You make me cry T_T

I've lost my dog last month clause he's too old.. I love him like my brother and I cry a lot. It's not a little sad but it's too sad
Kiarra-Chan
2009-08-31 . chapter 12
Aww... Poor poochie... I'm glad you updated! I can't wait for the next one!
toushiro1310
2009-08-31 . chapter 12
Poor doggy! And once again, a nice innkeeper ^^ Thanks for the update!
RebelFlame
2009-08-31 . chapter 12
Ghosts rule no exceptions. XD very cute chapter and Allen seriously needs a pet. Anyways...I didn't catch anything and yeah...Update soonish!
-RF
Anne Camp aka Obi-quiet
2009-08-31 . chapter 12
Aw, how sweet. Poor Allen. Guess he needed to learn about death sometime.

I really hope you're going to give us a view of Mana from the Akuma when the time comes...
toushiro1310
2009-08-30 . chapter 11
Ah, very, very good! I loved this chapter. Haha, I read the first three or so chapters of this story a while back and I thought I put this on my Story Alerts. Guess not. Good thing I caught it. I would've been missing out.
mysticwolf1896
2009-08-15 . chapter 11
such a wonderful story, looking forward to more.
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