 Gin no Hitomi 2009-10-24 . chapter 13No!! More chappies! Update please? *eyes that would make a puppy jealous*
No seriously. Please update?
Thanks,
You're loving fan that will probably use some of your ideas in the story to cover Allen's past in their own story. (Ya can't sue me!) |
 RebelFlame 2009-10-21 . chapter 13Um...some typos but I don't have time to point them out. SORRY! *working on project* Great chapter, thought this was how Mana was going to kick the bucket there for a second. Update soonish!
-RF |
 xdevil-childx 2009-10-21 . chapter 13i really like this story so updaet soon please |
 Anne Camp aka Obi-quiet 2009-10-20 . chapter 13"black whole" should be "black hole".
I'm wondering why the Akuma is helping them...it doesn't make sense to me. |
 Kiarra-Chan 2009-10-20 . chapter 13I was getting ready to cry when Mana almost died... TT^TT I'm so glad you updated! I didn't see ANY typos either! |
 authorwithissues 2009-10-20 . chapter 13yeah, now that i think about it, you do tend to abuse them, dont you? but, i dont think its anything too incredible, the abuse i mean. some people just go CRAZY and pervy to the max. i like yours much better than those ones. your abuse is much more realistic (is it just me or does this make me sound like some sort of sadist??) |
 Beyond The Dream 2009-10-20 . chapter 13This is awesome.. I got all worried for Allen, but he's okay! Then I got worried for Mana...but then he got better!! Then I realized something. Mana dies. Crap. Ah..I don't want it to happen...
Anyways, your updating makes me very happy! Thanks a bunch for a wonderful chapter! |
 xdevil-childx 2009-10-07 . chapter 12this is really good and i hope that you update soon |
 signrain 2009-09-01 . chapter 12You make me cry T_T
I've lost my dog last month clause he's too old.. I love him like my brother and I cry a lot. It's not a little sad but it's too sad |
 Kiarra-Chan 2009-08-31 . chapter 12Aww... Poor poochie... I'm glad you updated! I can't wait for the next one! |
 toushiro1310 2009-08-31 . chapter 12Poor doggy! And once again, a nice innkeeper ^^ Thanks for the update! |
 RebelFlame 2009-08-31 . chapter 12Ghosts rule no exceptions. XD very cute chapter and Allen seriously needs a pet. Anyways...I didn't catch anything and yeah...Update soonish!
-RF |
 Anne Camp aka Obi-quiet 2009-08-31 . chapter 12Aw, how sweet. Poor Allen. Guess he needed to learn about death sometime.
I really hope you're going to give us a view of Mana from the Akuma when the time comes... |
 toushiro1310 2009-08-30 . chapter 11Ah, very, very good! I loved this chapter. Haha, I read the first three or so chapters of this story a while back and I thought I put this on my Story Alerts. Guess not. Good thing I caught it. I would've been missing out. |
 mysticwolf1896 2009-08-15 . chapter 11such a wonderful story, looking forward to more. |