hi mr.fanfic writer! i love ur ginoxkallen fic! pls, make more!!
im looking forward to read ur ginoxkllen fic!! love it!

Hehehe...quite amusing indeed. And remarkably smooth, I must agree. I definitely want to try renga myself sometime...now all I have to find are some good victims to force--er, friends to spring the idea on. Yes. Friends.
Anyway. Meandering but better for that, as it left more time for fun and felt more light and realistic--like it didn't need to go anywhere. Like Kallen, I can't help but be amused.

Hey, this is cute! I've read the one by Tobi Tortue and through him/her(?) found out about this-what do you call it again-'renga' thing going on between 3 of you... It seems promising, so I'm going to read the last one~ Hope it's good!


~Autumn

Surprisingly, I really enjoyed this. I'm normally an ardent Kallen x Lelouch supporter, but the way you portrayed Kallen and Gino was appropriate. I definitely think there are romantic feelings there, but I don't think Kallen is going to take them seriously until after the war. I always imagined Kallen faithfully following Lelouch until the end (poor Gino). Well done with the descriptions of Gino slamming against the glass begging for attention. Only words of advice, stop calling Gino, Zino.