I hope you do a sequel (maybe during summer camp) because you portray Rachel and Trent rather nicely...sorry, I'm rambling

This was cute! first Hollows series ff that I've liked so far!

Aw, that was so cute, and so compleatly possible, because you know the charecters so well you have manged to come up with a fic which could very well have happend, great job. Iloved it, thats exactly how I imagine both of them would have been as kids, especially rachael with her diluted curseing comments and Trents hair smoothing habit, it also shows how he was conditioned to show no emotion by his father. amazeing. I loved this, you have a very good writeing style and I enjoyed reading your fic. :) x

Sweet and cute. Thank you.

Very cute! I love child Trent and Rachel :)

This was very adorable! A prequel to why Trent decided not to be nice to Rachel when they met. :) Very, very cute! I loved how it seems that Trent helped take away her pain too. I hope he does that in an upcoming book!

~ Jelp

Oh, so cute! These two are simply sweet here, and a very nice use of some unique description. Magic is always fun to play around with, and you put a great spin on it.

Great job!

I LOVED IT! It's so perfect the way it explains at the end how Trent was trying to compensate for having a crush on her by being mean at camp! And I think you portrayed them EXTREMELY well as little kids. That's EXACTLY how I'd imagine both of them as kids.

I especially loved the detail to Trent and his nervous cowlick habit.

SO PERFECT!

What a cute story. I haven't read WWBC yet but I can hope it has moments this great!

opps sorry, thought I was logged in. That review below is mine. Really loved the fic, thanks much for writing it =)

Awesome and utterly adorable. I love how Trent gave her a daisy, was it just a happy coincidence you chose daisies or was it intentional because the Ceri and Trent bouquet in WWBC was also daisies? Either way, great little tie-in! Also Trent's dad's warning him not to have a crush on her...aw.

Hey there liked it was really cute
Maria

That's adorable! dang trent's dad! ruining everything! soo cute.

~Frankie