Hi! Finally a new chapter!
Love the spat! I think that Robin makes a good point making a link between his love and the oak tree, they are both as strong. So I don't think he's too poetic.

I was worried that I wouldn't understand Marion's reasons for rejecting Robin, but now I do: she wants to be independent, create her own life. Correct?
And I love Much! Very funny!

All in all, I like this chapter and am looking forward to the next one!

Good! I think Much should have been a little older though. Like closer to however old Robin and Marian is.

ok so i copied and pasted the entire 20 chapters so i could read them like they should be read, on the printed page. it has been a while since i have had a look.

Hello! Just want to let you know that my favorite part in this chapter is:

"‘Try’ was a good way to put it, knowing that it would be more than a bit difficult. Even now, it was more than mere struggle not to reach out and tuck her stray hair blowing in the wind after escaping her braid. He was more than aware now that one kiss wouldn’t be enough. He needed her to the point of obsession, even if she didn’t share the same feelings. It couldn’t possibly be healthy, but what could he do about it? Nothing; she was out of his reach now, and was sure to stay there. At least she was with him, however difficult it was for him."

I know how he feels, so well done, writing something that at least I can relate to.

It's a nice chapter. I'm curious how their relationship progresses.
And how big is Sherwood? if Marian thought they could hide a small village in it. you'd think that the location would get out unless Sherwood was huge and you put it in a secluded part of it...I don't know. that's what my logical part is saying.
Good story, keep it going.

It took me a second to remember where I was in the story, but thats just my fault for having a bad memory.

You are again, doing great with emotions, I'm not sure how accurate what you are writing is from a guys perspective, since I'm not a guy, but it seems quite believable.

The tussle at the end confused me a bit the first time I read it. I reread it again and I wasn't confused anymore, and I'm not sure what confused me the first read, might have just been the distractions around me in the room when I was reading.

Keep up the great writing.

hm... I like this chapter but not so much the idea. I say keep going with this story. :)

Hi! Just finished reading your story. WOW! I had to keep on reading, it's that good :D
What happens now? Is this the end?
I think Marion's reaction was an interesting one and I am pleased you chose it. It makes everything so much more interesting.
Will Marion love Robin the way he loves her?

hey. Just saying. I put a new story up. Hope you like it.

i loved that one out of all of them. it was great. ur doing a wonderful job but put up more and more on both story's.

Awh... She outlawed herself for him... So when does Much and Little John come in. And i so want that T-shirt.Keep righting more!

it seems, irrational, I think you need to show more frustration and dreaming perhaps on her part, maybe some longing for things to be differnet between her and Robin. But other then that I think it was quite good, good to see things going back out into the forest :) I like it there.

You do know how to...mix things up. I'll tell you that. Good solid writing, lots of emotions. More action would make me happy, but thats just my personal taste. You're doing very well. I'm interested to see how this all develops.

I'm pretty sure this is the point where I'm suppose to be really upset with you.

But I'm not. Cause this is realistic, amazingly realisitic for a romantic story. So you have my applause for that.

I too ahve written chapters that made me cry, but those are ussually teh best ones, and this one is very well written. Fine job

Wow ur a romantic

and that is about all I have to say. Its well written, a bit to romancey for my personal taste, but its good.