Love it!

Booyah! Heck yes girl, that one is perfect! I winced when you did the hungover scene. That's what I call writing!

Lizzie

i just have to say "aw"

*ooh* This is fantastic, hun, really. You did a great job! I really think the roleplay has helped all of our writing.

So sweet! I love that ending, and the gentle progression of their relationship in all these little scenes.

Nice story! Nate was always ready to marry her. He just didn't have the ring yet P. The first part surprised me since I had to catch on where they were, but when Sophie mentioned that she was shot I was like "Oh!" Yeah, that was pretty clever.

By the way, the first part has the number 11 instead of 1. I think the site does that sometimes. Anyway, keep up the quality work!

I loved that so much.