Im gonna be honest...this is ALOT like the book! Iv'e read the book over five times and believe me, it is alot alike!

i have a friend she is a beta reader i think and i can spell really well and i like your story ur just rushing it that is why you only have one i notice that after some of your periods you don't doing a good job anyway and also i am writing a jumper story of a girl who falls in love with griffin. he is pretty cute though... :) alright and anyway i am just seeing what other stories there are about jumper alright bye!

I'm not in english use country. But I love the book jumper and creation. So I came to here and read this story.

So glad to meet you and I expect to read more stories.

Thank you!

you have a nice writing and some goods ideas... GO ON !

hey this is cool need more story come on get with it heh

I really enjoyed the story and am a big fan of the books. Some stuff in the story i thought did'nt really seem like they fit (just little things) but overall fantastic, i'd love to read more, especially if you decide to explore new areas that steven gould hasn't covered. thumbs up