I love how you showed this vulnerable confused side to him. How Sally was in essence that turning point in his life, as is their daughter. How affected he is by this distant family he belongs to but can never be a part of. I can't wait to read more =D

Oh My GOD!

I never read an Eddie&Sally fanfiction so sweet like yours!

Write more about Watchmen!

I loved it!

Gret job!

aw I loved this! Wonderfully written, and the Comedian is actually one of my favorite characters. Great Job!

I really love Eddie, probably more than I should, but I do >.<
This is really a great piece of work here. Blake's not a completely heartless bastard... he's just done some really bad things in his time... Man's got layers dangit!

This is amazing, astonishing, magnificent. Words cannot describe how much I love this; how much I love Eddie even more than Rorschach, in some strange way. (And that's a lot.lol) Anyway, I think the site needs more stories like this, it was wonderful. Didn't really do all that much, and yet, it said everything... His futile heartbreak born from his inability to stay close to Sally even though he knows he loves her... Beautiful.

aw poor eddie

Beautiful. Want more.