Damn... I can't squeal at the top of my lungs like I would normally.
I'll read it when nobody's home and THEN squeal at the top of my lungs. Oh, yes. *Hojo laugh*
Anyway, this was too cute! This story really was amazing and well-written!
Keep up the good work, my friend.

Aw, this was so sweet. I think it details their relationship perfectly! In every situation you gave it seemed like one wanted to give while the other wanted to receive. The cool thing though is that you switched it up so that it wasn't always Zack doing the giving, and Cloud doing the receiving. Lol, of course I prefer them as a non-yaoi couple, but this was very cute. I think the Zack/Cloud pairing is probably my favorite right now. I'm writing a story with them right now. I used to be a bigger Zerith fan, but lately I can't get enough of Clack! This was nice. It brought a smile to my face ^_^

I too enjoy the beauty of 'no convo' fics.
I think you pull it off very nicely, as some people make them and they turn out terrible. Not a word of it makes sense.
I favorited this and I really like it although I think you over-dosed on the cuteness.
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Wait, nevermind thats not possible. Were talking about Cloud?
Yes.
I said nothing.
Continue writing my friend.

omg...UBER CUTENES! Just died. Sobbing from the adorable-ness! just...love!

Such a beautiful piece. I adored it ^^

So adorable and lovely.

♥

Aw! How cute!! I loved that!! It was so sweet.

The style and just everything about this story is incredibly cute. Great work.

I just...wow! I don't think I could possibly tell you just how much I love this fic. They're just so adorable, and I really enjoyed the style of writing, with both of them mirroring each other. And I think next time I'm sick, I'll think it's not so bad if it means Zack will turn up on my doorstep to care for me. XD You write them so well, so convincingly, and all I can think to end this review with is 'aw'!

Oh my god I don't think I have EVER read anything this CUTE.

...and that's all I have to say. I absolutely loved it. Thank you for writing this and making my day.

This...
Is...
LOVE! I love it XD I'm relatively new to this pairing.. and this style lol ^^ But, this is a great piece of writing! I love the way it describes both sides of the story and how they both feel!
Really good stuff, keep it up!
x Muffin x

So cute! You wrote this perfectly! I luvvs it a lot!

OMG this was so cute! I loved it!

AW! this is awesome!

This was absolutely sweet, and I love the parallel structure you used.

I think it's really cool, because even though you kind of say the same thing, it's nice to be able to see how both of the boys feel, and how with each line, you add just a little bit more. :3

Great job!