Amazing!

Update soon!

this is a great story, you should deffinatly countinue it.

XDD This one is really good. This is the first Daughters of the Moon fic I've read in a long, long while. Just finished reading the very last book, of which I wasn't aware of its existance until a month or two ago, and had mixed feelings of the ending. This fic has helped pacify my want of a more final ending save for the fact that your fic is unfinished. Such a spectacular cliffy you've left us but I hope you have more in mind for this fic and plan to continue it. I am particularly intrigued by the dream Vanessa had. Is the woman in the dream Selene? I hope Vanessa gets her memories back and it would be kinda cool if she could get her powers back too. That the events that are occurring are coming to be much faster than Selene anticipated and Vanessa is needed to help protect and guide the new Daughters. I know Jimena is suppose to be their mentor but that doesn't mean she couldn't use a little help. Plus Vanessa's relationship with Zahi is just starting to get interesting as is her possible role with Adamantis. XD Please continue. Until then, I shall very much anticipate the next chapter.

Great story I like where its headed! Update?

I haven't reviewed in so long! I shall punish myself (forces self not to watch Harry Potter and the Half Blood Prince for a 5th time in theaters) There...

Anyway, this is getting great and intense. Zahi owes her an orgasm? SWEET! He owes me one, too. ;)

"Girls these days worry too much about their figures and WHAT THEY PUT IN THEIR MOUTHS." Am I the only one getting the sexual innuendo here? Ha, in your endo... Sorry, Scrubs joke.

Please, please update! I want Vanessa to know so badly. And the relationship/friendship type thing between Cassandra and Zahi is so... believable. So well adapted and smooth. :) I found a new favorite pairing!

I was gone from civilization for a week and what a nice present to have wehn I got back!

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Okay, the Zanessa date was sweet enough to give me diabetes XD It was adorable, Zahi's such a smoothie :P

I really liked the short blurbs at the end, with Jimena and Collin's obvious issues as well as Cassandra kind of unleashing her anger. BUT WHO WAS PREGGERS?

XD Great chap! Can't wait for the next one 3

...I LOVE YOU!

Thank you, thank you, thank you for this wonderful birthday present! It was brilliant.

"An orgasm." Oh, yeah. Damn right he owes her one! Sheesh.

And can you talk about ominous ending, my gosh.

You're the best, Ashe! Again, thank you so much for this awesome chapter.

**Huggles my little fried Oreo!**

-Jen

TYMMIE AND ZAHI AND PRIVATE MOMENTS AWEHASJDHASJDHASJDASJDAHS /mouth foam

I'd comment more, but that is seriously stuck in my head for the sheer hilarity of it XD

Have I mentioned that I love mama bear!Cassandra? Because I do. I seriously, seriously do.

Are you hinting at Zahi maybe once having feelings for Cassandra? Because you would make me impossibly happy if that's what you meant by this:

“I don't want to hear it. You can't keep me for yourself, Cassandra. You chose him. Don't think that you can keep me under lock and key, too,” he muttered dryly, walking away from her and towards the bathroom.

If not, well, I shall keep my delusions! MAWHAWHAWHA

Oh man, I really love reading Tymmie seducing Cassandra. Like, a lot. Typically it's the other way around, and it's interesting to see that someone as aggressive as Cassandra is in such a reverse position of power now that she's not a Follower.

LOL, oh yeah, the actual main characters of the story!

I really love bad!sex Zahi. I mean, we expect him to be sexy all the time, but the poor guy needs a break occasionally XD. I can't wait to see how Vanessa interacts with the next generation of DOTM too.

Poor Zahi... to be interrupted like that... and by Tymmie of all people... though I guess Karyl would have been worse...

So does Tymmie speak French and Arabic or is Zahi no longer thinking in those languages?

Poor Jimena is in a horrible position; I hope she figures out how to take care of Vanessa and do her duty to the Daughters soon.

Farrell

As you already know, I love the intro.

It's just too great! I'm so glad that Tymmie made an appearance! That whole scene was funny to me.

Ashe, you're killin' me with this story.

I'm so in love with it! XD

Write more!

-Jen.

Zahi and Vanessa are unexpectedly cute together. And overprotective!Cassandra for the Win!

Collin totally has Jimena mid, body and soul! (And that better not change in this story... or else...)

-Farrell

I'm so curious about what you have up your sleeve for this story.

I have an idea, but it isn't clear.

Also, what's up with Jimena and Collin? Their love can't die!

You're such a sneaky little fried Oreo, Ashe.

Loved this chapter, of course!

Awesome work, D

-Jen.