aww cool ending, and so cute
yay for Tari and Brooklyn

It was excellant. I loved the argument bit between Tala and Kai, that was so funny. And I liked Bryan's comment about Marina having Tala around her finger, lol.
Ember's such a coward and his gang seem kinda dense, just blinking and walking away quickly, lol.
And aww, the lovebirds are together in public at last, sort of, lol. Nice to have Bryan banging Ian on the head, hehe.

Great chapter and fantastic story altogether. I really enjoyed it :)

whoa mean Ember
cute ending sorry for the late review

Le gasp! Love is in the air for Brooklyn and Tari~! This was an awesome chapter Smiffy, and Ember would make a great rapist *Sarcasm* But still brilliant job Smiffy ;D

Aww, Kai trying to solve things but nope, can't understand girls, hehe.
Bad, bad, bad Ember. He is so twisted, he needs serious help, lol. Good on Brooklyn to get him off, but typical coward ran away.
Aww, sweet relationship. They'll work so well, hehe.

Can't wait for the ending, it'll be cool :)

Wow! Keep this story going!

Great Story Poor Tari she haves a very bad time

Awesome chapter
I liked Tari surprising Kai at the start like that and when he yelled after her that he wanted a 'hot' shower, lol.
Bryan, typical, considering to break up Tala and Marina so he can be happy and so can Tari. I mean, either drunk or mean, lol.
And having RayxMariah as one of the making out couples, lol.
Aw, poor Tari seeing what she did, though better that than Kai literally kicking the lovebirds out, lol.
Nice way of bringing Brooklyn in, I hope he makes Tari feel better, aw.

Awesome, can't wait for the update.

aww poor Tari.*gives a friendship hug*

I really feel bad for Tari, I mean it's not fair on her TT-TT well still I'm looking forward to the next chapter to see what happens :D

I know exactly how Tari feels, that's actually happened to me before (Except not the new person getting along really well with the person I like) but still good job Smiffy :D

Wow awesome start for an awesome story, please do continue!

haha this is all different then beyblade lol
its great luv it

Perfect, you did Marina well.

I liked how Tala greeted Marina and that Bryan copied Tari's answers for science, hehe.
I liked how the guys got on well with her and that Tari got jealous. And yep, Bryan missed his chance, lol.
I also liked Marina and Tala's flirting, hehe.
Poor Kai really having to put up with a jealous sister and only just realising it, lol.

Can't wait for next chapter. It's awesome.