Good story

It's a good storyline but the run-on sentences drove me crazy. Please fix them

rated T

I approve of getting rid of Ron.

"Hermione found there was an added advantage to staying in bed and breakfast hotels and houses, and that was the usually very comfy beds they could make love in," - Yes, very comfy beds with as many warm quilts, blankets and or down duvets as they wanted or needed. DH (book) and its bleakness and especially some of my favourite fictional people having to sleep so very cold in it, upset me.

I definitely love this version more than JKR's. Keep up the good work.

That's how it should have been...get rid of the extra baggage. Kill the bad guy... and get the girl.

*Sigh* it was sadly not to be.

Justice for Ron, its amazing that JKR didn't see it that way. Great one-shot!

This is a nice change. Hermione is too smart to end up with Ron. She and Harry are a much better match. Thanks for a different view. I really liked this one. pms

love this story

That was great! I have to admit that although I agreed with everything Hermione said to Ron, I did feel a little bad for him when she and Harry kicked him out but that was before Ron insisted Hermione was his and that made me realize feeling sorry for Ron was a waste of time. I really liked it!

I thought the story was great and well written - especially has Hermione recalled the events of HBP. It was plausible - which is always one thing I look for in a fanfic - except for Ron's return.

I know you had a little note at the beginning and I agree; what Ron did was unforgivable and in leaving, he should have realized the consequences but I always saw Harry as a fierce friend. I only really complain because it seemed a little -too- harsh for their (Harry and Hermione) characters.

Still, it was a great one shot! I'm looking forward to reading more of your work

need to add the next chapter one mistake thow, remember Vordys name is taboo

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Again, this story is the way that I would have written it, and have on another site, instead of the way that it is in DH. Good job, thanks.

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