This was some very good writing. I can't wait to see how the plot unveils in the future. Especially the bit about them confronting Charlie. I see that you've written a whole lot of Stargate and SGA fics. I'll get write on those, as the shows have been a delight to watch and the majority of the fanfics are good. Are you looking forward to the Stargate Atlantis Movie?

Loved the first chapter, I have a story almost like this one , check it out if you want to, it's called What If?

MJ005

Very cool!! I do hope you write more of this once you get all your essays done, cos I'd love to see where you go with it, especially where Jacob is concerned! Awesome stuff so far! ^_^

HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT CHAPTERS!

haha this is pretty good! i like it!

this is so good! please update soon! in bella's POV, that is my fave!

omg this is so good

soonish better by asap cause that story awsome

Wow, I always wondered what would happen if Edward couldn't save Bella! Thank you so much for writing this and please continue! I can't wait for the next chapter!