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starlight-886
2009-10-13 . chapter 4
I really, really love this. I am a huge Punk/Kelly fan, but I really like how you write Chris/Kelly. I can't wait to see what happens with the three of them. I really hope you get inspired again and continue. =D
xXRiaHardyOrtonXx
2009-09-07 . chapter 4
I LOVE THIS STORY SOO FAR!!
update soon =D
-Nero-Moore-
2009-07-28 . chapter 4
Great story. I know it's been a while since you updated, but I can only hope inspiration strikes again, so I'll be able to read more. If not, it was still awesome. It's nice to see a different couple and I also like that you put them out of their wrestling persona and kept them that way. Congrats, not many can do that. The emotion that you put into each character is stunning, so congrats! Awesome story. I'll keep my eyes peeled and my fingers crossed for more. =D
jojocheer28
2009-06-05 . chapter 4
Oh I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story! It's so good and really well written!
Awesome story, update soon please :D
x.rustyhalo
2009-05-22 . chapter 4
Ah-mazing job on your story so far, girly. I love
Kelly&Punk's friendship. (: I can't wait for the next chappy,
poor Chris, lol.
kandyandrellyfan4life
2009-05-20 . chapter 4
awesome cant wait till the next one it was so good love it soo munch i cant stop saying it was awesome lol
TJ Sparkles
2009-05-14 . chapter 4
Amazing :) By far the best chapter, in my opinion. I kinda feel bad for Chris, but really, I mean, he should have seen it coming. That being said, I don't think Jess' reaction will be enough to keep him away from Kelly..he's staying away now, but if he stays away too long, Kelly might just have moved on by the time he decides to come back. So he better go find her and apologize before it's too late.

Great chap, I can't wait for more :)

Tina
Hailey Egan
2009-05-14 . chapter 4
good story. i like the writing style. poor chris and kelly how bad to have picture on the internet. chris's wife was right to tell him not to call her. she needs time to cool off. and i like that he is conflict about his feelings. you really showed that yes he loves his wife but that he cares for kelly too. and who would want to be with chris. he is hot. i can't wait for more.
Ashleymassarophan1
2009-05-14 . chapter 4
aw punk and kelly are so cute even when there just freinds and chris is big trouble awesome chap love it!
Glamagirl
2009-05-13 . chapter 4
“They aren't those kind of pictures are they?” That made me lol

So Punk and Kelly had a relationship back in the day, wonder if some old feelings will resurface now... Probably not, she's SO into Chris =)
It's nice that she can go to Punk for support even after their break up, kudos to them.

I feel bad for Jess, I mean, it's bad to find out yor husband is cheating by having your friends and even youur mother (of all people) telling you. If I were her I would personally hurt him somewhere down below the waist so he wouldn't be able to spread his love all around... lol, jk!

I think that Jess telling him not to call her or search for her will push Chris into Kelly's direction, after all he's already thinking about her.

Great update! Can't wait to see how Chris & Kelly will interact next time they see each other. It must be awkward for them since everybody knows...
Take care!
TakerTakeMe
2009-05-13 . chapter 4
It's good to know that Phil is going to be there for Kelly, even though they're broken up. I'm surprised that I was right about them having history together. I wonder if there's any possibility of them getting back together...especially now that she's spending the night with him.

I pity Chris. He doesn't know what to do. Jess doesn't want to have any contact with him, and I don't blame her. But now he's feeling guilty for the way he treated Kelly and it seems like he wants to go be with her. Too bad he can't...not that I want him to or anything lol.

Another cool update, thanks for sharing!

~J
RatedRDivaKristy
2009-05-13 . chapter 3
Really like :)
update quick haha
+ poor Kelly
lol
TakerTakeMe
2009-05-12 . chapter 3
I have conflicting emotions here. Part of me wants to say, "That's what she gets," about Kelly. She knew her camera had been lost, she knew what was on it, and she had to know there was a strong possibility that those incriminating photos would get out. Yet she didn't bother to tell Chris a thing, he had to find out from John Cena of all people. That's just not right and she shouldn't expect for him to be happy about this.

The other side of me really pities her after Chris's reaction to the entire situation. When she told him that she loved him and he wouldn't say it back or hug her back, I was just like, "Wow, that's harsh." Doesn't he love her a tiny bit? Or is this just a one-sided relationship, because that would suck for her.

I wonder what'll happen with Kelly and Phil. I'm sensing they have some kind of history together but I could be - I probably AM - wrong about that lol.

Nice update!

~J
HBKnY2J4eva
2009-05-12 . chapter 3
interesting!!..pleasee update soon!!
TJ Sparkles
2009-05-11 . chapter 3
Yay, Punk :) I love the man and the fact that you've added him as the second character in this has made me very happy. I can't wait to see what role he's going to play in this Chris/Kelly debacle. I know Chris was upset, so does when he told Kelly to go, does it mean that it's the end of their relationship?

:) Really, I love this, hunn.

Tina
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