That was humorous, especially at the end. XD Good character interaction.

I love this story. The best I've seen, good job! Poor Vita. And Signum and Shamal were funny too.

this is fun to read! XD full of amusements, lol! and this is also a bit... weird. o.O considering you are the writer of 'melody of a broken memory', somehow gives me the feelings of irony, you know. but i'm glad... reading this fluffy fic somehow sooth me from the pain i felt from reading melody. hehe.

all the best!

F,SLKEFAWDC A

Sorry. My stomach is contracting very painfully and I have an outrageously stupid grin on my face now, so I can't show my appreciation for this EPIC ROFLMAO chapter. Comedy that makes you laugh aloud is hard to come by, but apparently you can pull off anythang.

Meh, I'm usually a fussy crackpot but I simply adore how you've depicted all the characters. By the way, I second Hayate's threesome idea, even if it would be at the expense of a possessive Nanoha.

MOAR PLEASE! This is some pretty awesome jazz you've got going on.

Their conversations are stupid but funny lol.

Oh LMAO, poor Signum.
And Alicia /sneezing/ in the tank? That was priceless! XD

Awesome as always, thanks for writing!

LOL i thought this was hilarious!
I like this part:

“You look like you’ve just seen a lesbian loli-pedo scene.”

Hayate suddenly tilted her head in contemplation.

teehee

wow, this is ridiculously stupid...but i liked it anyway.

lol! Extremely funny and entertaining!

can't leave a review busy laughing...

Well, well, soldier...

LOL
LMAO
ROFL

This was funny. I laughed.
Nice work, marine. Keep it up.

Update ASAP! That's an order!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!

It's good to see you back and updating 2 fics the same day, Eli.

I prefer fics more centered in Nanoha and Fate, but I think you did a good job with this piece of comedy.

Thanks for updating, and good luck in college.

XD oh yes, this is was crackling funny :P

heh :) this is cute^^

Wow. I am not sure what else I can say. If anything, that was an extremely entertaining piece. I can't wait to see what else you come up with. Happy writing!