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kaito142
2009-12-03 . chapter 1
Like it. Love it.

Please update again!! ^v^
Vlacas
2009-11-22 . chapter 11
dude i'd love 2 c how chloe & bart got 2gether. do u think u could do a 1-shot or add it into the story.

btw ur story dominates
breathalittlelonger
2009-11-10 . chapter 11
I really liked this. You captured Chlois perfectly, not to mention the rest of the characters as well. :)
xxxCloisloverxxx
2009-11-01 . chapter 11
Love this chapter! I do hope Clark finds his way home and two his Lois!Please update soon!
xxxCloisloverxxx
2009-11-01 . chapter 10
Love this chapter! It's awesome and I love that Clark not crossing the street makes a difference! I'm also glad that Clois is a true cannon now! Clark maned up and kissed Lois or real without any Red-K and with her knowing it was him! So I''m now really happy :D! Great chapter and I can't wait intill the next one!
Azurite
2009-10-24 . chapter 11
*wails* That's it?! I just started watching Smallville again recently, and in my search for good Clois fic, I read a lot of poor stuff that was OOC and rife with bad grammar and spelling. Then, miraculously, through the amazing powers of Google, I found this. Excellent, original story (well, for someone that's only read a handful of Smallville fics thus far; I couldn't really say how commonplace the time travel fics are), FABULOUS characterization, and I don't think I spotted a single grammar or spelling issue that stood out to me.

I'm left with lots of questions, same as Clark, so I'm hoping at least the important ones get answered soon. I'd love to know what the older Clark's up to in the future, even assuming the flashes that past!Clark saw in his "dream" state. Plus, Kara! And Bruce! So many things throughout this fic had me grinning from ear to ear. Some might say there's a pairing overdose here, but I think you've weaved it into the DCU and the Smallville characterizations quite well.

Excellent work, and I look forward to reading more!
Evergreen
2009-10-23 . chapter 11
*sigh* Clark and Lois fluff! I've been waiting for that :) Excellent as usual, hopefully we'll get more Clark/Lois fluff in the future? Subtle aren't I? ;)
CrazyLikeaFox
2009-10-20 . chapter 11
A very detailed and believable Smallville story, one of the best I've come across. Love the liberal use of other justice league characters and think your characterisations of both Lois and Clark are spot on. Looking forward to seeing more.
wonderlandbomb.
2009-10-19 . chapter 7
I love Clark's reply upon seeing the costume. In fact, I'm totally loving this whole story!
wonderlandbomb.
2009-10-18 . chapter 6
Well, that's a twist. Could it be from Doomsday? I'm looking forward to finding out.
wonderlandbomb.
2009-10-18 . chapter 5
I love how Lois was interacting with Clark in this one. Amazing chapter. :)
wonderlandbomb.
2009-10-17 . chapter 4
I gotta love Oliver and Bruce for noticing like that! I wonder if Clark will put two and two together from Bruce's last statement? :)
Seersha
2009-10-17 . chapter 11
AMAZING chapter! I loved it. You write so beautifully, this is one of my all time favourite Clois fics. Keep the good work coming. P.S. Happy belated birthday! Cheers
wonderlandbomb.
2009-10-17 . chapter 3
From start to finish, I thought this chapter was absolutely adorable! Especially the ending bit where Clark become jealous of himself. I can't wait to see what happens when he finds out. I'm also curious about a few other things, for instance, what happened to Jimmy and Chloe considering he's still alive. With that in mind, what happened to DOOMSDAY, considering Jimmy's still alive. As well as Tess ... Yes, I'm curious about her too. LOL So off topic, I know. :P However, I don't doubt that they'll be answered in the following chapters. :) Well, maybe not the Tess bit. :P Keep up the good work.
wonderlandbomb.
2009-10-17 . chapter 2
Now I understand why the title of this chapter is "Surprise". LOL keep up the good work! :)
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