This is a really good story. Rose is a very interesting character, I hope you don't drop this forever.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

HOLY SHIT. MY STORY HAD THAT EXACT THING HAPPEN. -jaime and my OC moving in their sleep- you read my mind

aw! write!may? gah.

xOXo

i loved this chapter and can't wait for the next! also, i liked your comment at the end, i totally know what you mean about class being completely boring. anyway, your comment was funny and it made me laugh :)

I've finished reading your story and I love it! Write more!

i love this story!

keep on updating

AW

I Love the story

nice. ok, it still sounds like shes bragging a little, but its getting better.

TRUTH OR DARE IS AWSOME!

First, dare. kiss jamie? the person that asks has to be immature, cause old people dont ask things like that.

i really liked your story! you're very creative! but when are you gonna post the next chapter? the preview that you gave already has me hooked :) OH! is it about wanda finally being able to go shopping with someone (and that someone being Rose?)

I love this story! It's one of the most original stories I've ever read! IT's awesome! My favorite part is when Rose draws Kyle's face and everyone laughs. You're an awesome writer and keep writing cause I can't wait that long.

Love this story!

she needs to stop braging. or, when she says " because of my super cheta speed" just "because im faster" not ho muc hfaster, just faster. oh, and try reading it out loud to yourself. that way you can see if the words flow, and make sense the way you word them.

aw! love at first sight. cute.

hii this is good! u should definitly keep writing

i liked the part about 'kyle helpings' :)

please update soon!

Very good. I enjoyed this story immensly. You should continue, one thing I kept wondering while reading is: Don't you think that the humans wouldn't like her. Because in the Host they didn't like Wanda and I know she is n't a soul but they probly would think she was bad if she was not human. Anyways that is just a suggestion. Very good story!