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Reviews for: Closer - Page 1 of 3
Akkane
2009-09-11 . chapter 2
Are you thinking to continue your fic? Right? I love your history and I'd like to know how Davis and Chloe end before their nigth together. I'd need to know! :D
CloudedDreamergal
2009-07-22 . chapter 2
Please update soon I really like your story and I'm a major Chloe and Davis fan, and Chloe and Doomsday fan, they were meant for each other. Your story's so cool!
wholegrainmustard
2009-05-09 . chapter 2
Please continue! The story is GREAT! :)
Stephycats7785
2009-05-06 . chapter 2
Wow I like this. The depth you go to in the stories is great.
Stephycats7785
2009-05-06 . chapter 1
That was amazing. I cant wait to read more.
Lost in Day Dreams
2009-05-05 . chapter 2
Dang, I was totally expecting to see Chloe's reaction until I scrolled down further and saw it was the end! How dare you trick me like that?! Lol! Just kidding! I did wanna see the reaction but it only makes me all the more excited for the next chapter. Great job my friend! :)
MythStar Black Dragon
2009-05-05 . chapter 2
No dont mind that its long loved it wonderful
maria
Baily007
2009-05-05 . chapter 2
OMG - this story is so freakin' awesome! Now I can't wait for Chloes reaction to Davis revelation. But I'm sure: NOTHING will break them apart. I mean those two are MADE for eachother. PLEASE, update soon!
LeLa London
2009-05-04 . chapter 2
Nice chapter. I just wish it was longer. I wanted to find out Chloe's reaction to Davis' secret...but I'll wait. :)
SV_fan_4_life
2009-05-04 . chapter 2
I LOVED it!
norrific
2009-05-04 . chapter 2
please don't apologize for long chapter, especially really good long chapters with lots of chlavis goodness. i serioiusly hope davis tells chloe what's going on before she finds out some other way. i'm so glad this story is getting continued. loved it.
Rosel
2009-05-03 . chapter 2
Wonderful chapter. I love Davis' inner thoughts they are so how I imagnie him being. I like how you show a mixture of him being haappy about Jimmy breaking up but feeling sad for the way it happened. This was really well done. I loved the line where Davis called chloe his Angel of redepmtion. Awe. So sweet. I was waiting for him to just tell her, but something like that can't be he easiest thing in the world. Great job! And up date soon! I can't wait to see Chloe's reaction.
barcodestripped
2009-05-03 . chapter 2
amazing update. no complaints here about it being long. i loved that about this chapter. now i'm anxious to find out if Davis actually tells Chloe and what her reaction will be especially since they've already slept together.
LeLa London
2009-05-02 . chapter 1
First of all, you have to continue. Second, you're amazing. I love how you write Chloome/Chldavis. I just really like your style of writing. I don't know. It works for me. Thanks for sharing.
robyn
2009-04-07 . chapter 1
Oh, I love your story. Actually, I'm not a big fan of smallville but always loved Chloe and hoped someday, someone who is fully know and care about Chloe will appear.

And here it is. David Bloom aka Doomsday... and the Davis in your story is so sad... and so him.

After watching ethernal, I can't wait for another smallville episode of them together and looking everywhere story of chlvis. I read your story right before work and couldn't let the image away..

In the turbulence episode, when Davis was standing in the pouring rain looking up Talon (I'm not exactly sure if it is talon...), he looks so lonely and sad.. and desperate... who needs Chloe's hug.

And I'm not ready to let them go :( I hope I can see them together in season 9...

I hope I can read your writing. and can't wait to see the next chapter of "closer".

Thanks for the good story~
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