this is awesome :)
moondance... ok, ill add it

YAY UPDATE!

Random Person 1: Dude, did she just faint?
Random Person 2: Hmm... She did! Oh! I remember this!
Random Person 1: huh?
Random Person 2: I bet she has a condition known as "Fangirlism" in which things like awesome sequels to awesome things like fanfiction, mang etc.. cause the person to die, faint, squee, and various other weird things.
Random Person 1: Um.. so should we call a hospital or something?
Random Person 2: Nah. There are usually people who deal with this stuff.

Purple Woman 1: This is critical! Hand me the pocky stat!
Purple Woman 2: Pocky!
Purple Woman 1: Highly caffeinated coffee!
Purple Woman 2: Highly caffeinated coffee!

Me: Wut? What did you do?
Purple Woman 1: I inject coffee into your veins and stuffed pocky down your throat.
Purple Woman 2: Nothing like pocky and coffee to restart someone!
Purple Woman 1: Now we must vanish off into the sunset!

Random Person 2: See?
Random Person 1: Woah... That's crazy.
Random Person 2: No that's otaku!

Brought to you by Aki and Mr. Bunny! WHO REALLY LIKED THE DARKLY TREACHEROUS SERIES. We think that they were not as poorly written as you say and loved the idea and the spin you took on it. We REALLY hope you will put it back up soon even if you don't change it. Please?!
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So awesome!! *-*
I want BB to show up again!! T-T

This is REALLY nice!! *-*
Will BB show up again? Please make him show up!! He is awesome *o*
And I wanna see A's reaction when she sees him ^o^
Please continue soon!

Yay! You updated!
I like the idea of A meeting Light in middle school. I wonder how they will react to each other. Will Beyond appear again? His character is also very interesting.
Please update soon! Mr. Bunny and I beg you!
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Very interesting.

It actually says it in the book (page 105, the 2nd paragraph to be exact) that A is a boy. Nevertheless, this is a very interesting story.

Keep up the good work. (:

oh me gawwdd you updated! haha i'm so happy, as a fan of your fics, I've missed your updates ^^
I like how you told the story of how A survived after her suicide not too briefly but not dragging it on. Can't wait to see how she goes at Daikoku academy. Are you gonna show A's intelligence and how she hides it? Because I really look forward to a FEMALE genius coz DN is really lacking in that department lol.
And are you going to ever have time to write your HP fics? Not that I want to bug you on that but those fics are awesome and it's a shame they're not finished. But whatever you feel like I suppose, I like your work anyway. Thankyou again! =D

Yay~ they get to finally meet each other... i wonder how that will go... especially with Light sorta manipulative behavior. :D

Please Update~

This is turning out quite well.

wow, really good so far! more soon?

finally a story where one of the heirs is a girl! a's gonna be friends with light, huh? hopefully she'll be able to keep him grounded like she did b, though seeing as you put the main characters as a and ryuzaki light is probably gonna beyond redemption.

...now this is probably just 'cause of the last dn fic i read before this one, but after finishing this i couldn't help but wonder what if light was a before being adopted by the yagami family. i'm a big ryuzaki/light fan and it would make an interesting story, but the idea came from what you wrote so...

what i'm trying to ask is would you mind if i posted or had someone post something like that as a challenge fic? a story where a is light and b smuggled him out after his seeming suicide and he was adopted by the yagami family?

i'm not a writter, in fact my story writting sucks but it really would be an interesting read i think. but like i said since i got the idea from reading your story it could be considered as stealing your plot while changing around a few things so i won't post anything without your say so. i don't have an email or site account but i am a fan of your stories so if you give permission could you say so whenever you update one of your fics, just a quick yes on an author's note? if not then i'll just assume you said no.

um sorry, i know this is troublesome but i really don't have any way to get in contact with authors on this site

SWEET! It's absolutely awesome. I'm glad you made A a girl, only because i'm not a fan of yaoi and it's hard to find a story with an A pairing for me. Or actually any death note pairing. So I thank you.

I love this idea! Please update soon!

Amazing! I loved how you got into how L and A felt. you brought in so much emotion into this story!And yea B is not stable at all! I also thought it was great on how you used words in the right places, you made us(the readers) visulize what happened perfectly!I hope you will update as soon as you can!

-AnimelovinKiDD

WOW! Great job! UPDATE soon!XD