Hey,
This was really good! Are you gonna do anything else with it?

I liked that, them working together in a way that suits them both. 'Cause I'm getting awfully tired of everyone crapping on Cameron when I'm watching the show.*insert eyeroll here*

Thanks for posting this, it was an interesting perspective on humanity and dreaming.

-Ellie

its good

I really like your use of language here, and the image of Sarah still trying to protect John, even in this nightmare world where there is no protection.

I like your story. It has some really interesting strings in it.

I think it really could be helpful for Sarah not to feel so hard, not to resist...
Well, we'll never know, right?

Anyway, I really appreciate your story, thanks for writing and posting. I hope you'll write more fics.

Take care, Mel.