 expletive deleted 2009-05-17 . chapter 1I really like the relationships you portray between all the characters. Like with Kyoko and Gokudera - she sees that he wants a partner that can take action, and doesn't realise that he also sees her as a strong partner in her own right. It's all very realistic and gives a good picture of their TYL life.
Scaring the kids with C4/chocolate is hilarious! It's a miracle they made it out of their toddler years.
I've actually wanted to read a story like this for a while. Gokudera is so emotionally stunted that it's interesting to think of what he might want from a girlfriend, what kind of person might appeal to him. But I despaired of finding a good OC/canon character romance ... basically ever, so this was a great find on top of being a satisfying read. |