You have a very nice bit of humor in this. just right. I am really interested in this story. I haven't read much Kari, I hope this will be good! :)

Oh I actually like Kate with a crazy father. Sounds good.

NO

hey should have kept Joel! Your mean! They should have kept him!

Post more soon.

*Goes to a corner to cry*

Sweet. Ari has a mini me. :D
Update soon

Salii :D

luv it

oh pls more on tony and ziva. pls let them be back together! it is sad when she said, "but remeber i will always love you." it makes me think of the song. and is making me cry... :'C
and micheal rivking probably set her up to say goodbye to tony so that he could be with her, but then why would she say,"its for the best" UGH u is confusing me! just hurry up and update pls!

Great chapter, ouch, poor Tony and Ziva, I really hope they will work things out as well, as Kate and Ari, of course! They can't break up, argh! Joel's a cute name though!

Okay, one more chapter; bring it on, hehe! Update soon...

No.. You can't let Kate and Ari break up...They already did and it was depressing...I wish they had kept the baby. Poor Tony and Ziva.

This was a really sad chapter. It was good, but I could feel Kate's pain when she had to give away her son!

I can't wait to read more soon!

I like the name Joel! But I don't like them breaking up, you can't leave it like this!!

Aww they should have ket the baby and why are you breaking them up.. That is horrible. On the upside though the name is cute.


Good Job

Oh my gosh! No way, Kate and Ari cannot break up. :'( Please do not tell me that they are going to break up! That would be so tragic. We have already had to see them leave each other.

Anyway, I really love it. This has been a really awesome fanfic & I cannot waite to read the last chapter before the sequal. Will there be a lot of chapters like this one? :)

YAY NEW CHAPTER!!
Finally, the baby is born. Joel. That is so awesome!!

PLEASE let them meet up in college and fall in love again or something. And please make the last chapter really really long. I love this story and don't want it to end!

Them giving Joel up is so sad. Make it better! : )

Razi

Aww! This chapter is so happy but so sad too! I'm so happy that little Joel is safe and healthy, but I'm sad that Kate and Ari are going to break up. =( But it is understandable.