Great job, but some words you repeated like he said the emperor. It made it hard to understand. All in all though great job.

Good Chapter. I hope Vegeta gets out. UPDATE!

Great story. Please hurry and UPDATE! I'M LOVIN THIS STORY!

i thought that guy was King Vegeta for a sec

something tells me this is a trap

WOW! super saiyan 3 eh?

i was right! :D and battle royal eh?

i bet Trunks'll beat Majuub!

i knew it! just forgot the fact that the HBTC is destroyed in their time but still!

i think i know what Trunks has in mind -smirks-

God chapter and I just can't wait to see what happens next, really good work!

Wow did not see that coming, King Vegeta Alive. Great story please keep it up I will write on as well eventually, thanks and please keep it up.

You'll have to wait until the next chapter to find out who won :D

Oh yeah... and for SSJ3 I thought Goten and Trunks were getting a bit too weak and left out so i thought i'd let them catch up a bit with the others :) Now they can have a bigger role to play =D

And Vegeta can now transform all the way from SSJ1 to SSJ4 without the blutz waves generator - none of the others no that but Trunks had a slight feeling that he could become stronger than them so thats why he made sure they ended the match as soon as they transformed.

The story is going to get more interesting soon as the plot thickens and more mysteries and characters are added and the introduction of the first major villain may not be too far away :)

I hope you've enjoyed it so far ^^

:O WHO ONE, and damn, didn't expect super saiyan three...can vegeta still change into super saiyan 4 ?

LOL i loved how Vegeta scared the ** outa the guy haha