*Clunk* *Clunk* *Clunk*

...Yes, that was the sound of my head hitting the computer desk. Repeatedly, mind you.

Urgg. You want to know my opinion of that, honestly? Your little stunt was COMPLETELY and TOTALLY EVIL.

For the love of all that is holy, UPDATE SOON, WOMAN! xD

Love, your faithful reader,

Kolored.

holy crap

alice kick massive ass

teehee

omg whos at the door

did ratchel find out

is it riley know

is it edward

who could it be

repost soon please

Oh my god!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON?

OMG OMG UPDATE NOW!

I love how you handle things. You'll update again soon? Yes!

You are an evil writer, I'm at the edge of my seat right now. I can't believe how into the story I'm in. OMG update soon, this story is way to good!

That was just cruel, that cliff hanger. I can't wait to find out what happens next with Bella & Edward and who is knocking angrily on the door. Maybe it's Conley or her mother. Good job! I love this story.

Hm...three loud angry knocks. I'm guessing Edward, or Jake, or some male. Perhaps Rachel's mom or even Rachel, but I dunno.

Great chapter! Update soon!

Rachel's mother was way out of line. She doesn't know two shits about Bella and Edward. Hell Rachel eased her into Bella and Edward's relationship, and she KNEW they were in love. Her and her mother feels threatened. Bella should have told that lady to kick rocks!

i actually cant think of anything for the party... sorry.

i realy like this story ) keep it up)

rachels mom's a fucking bitch!

hi i'm mary rose and i just want to say that i love yur story and i think it's really good.

I don't know if you would need any of these things but i have some songs i would like to suggest, 1. because i always relate stories to song it helps me get in the mood and 2. because edward is a singer in this story and i have song hat i think would show there break up well, you know like the different stages of a break up ...well anyways i also have some that you could convert into poems for seeing bella's side of the break up... so here they are and if you don't like them you dont have to use them i just think the lyrics would go great with the story so yeah.

Bella

' me away- by the jonas brothers

't forget- by Demi Lovato

days of your life- Kellie Pickler*

4. Forever and Always- Taylor Swift*

5. 7 things- Miley Cyrus

6.A thousand Miles- Vanessa Carlton

Edward

's Left of me- Nick Lachey

over- Jesse McCartney

to burn- Taylor Swift

- White tie Affair

5.A little too not over you- David Archuleta

6. Heels over Head- Boys like Girls

so I want you to tell me what you think of them and also the ones with the stars are the ones i like the most ...oh and if you want just ask me why i pick a song or what i was thinking when i heard it i would be happy to and if you want any thing else my mind is open to you and your story. Cant wait till the next chapter!

Mary Rose ;)

OMG! i luv it! keep writing!

omg WTH Edward! (what the hey) so he has different feelings for both of them?

and ugh, could the mom be anymore blunt?

Ohh, I don't like Rachel's mom. She's smart and tricky. That makes me scared... It was an overall great chapter! Keep pu the great work!