Beautiful!
Absolutely perfect in every way imaginable.

aw that was cute...and sexy...and hot lol great job! i love how sexy u made Edward ^0^

Aw Really sweet, just, just very sweet ^_^ And amazingly well written too! :) Loved it

Simply amazing. It was beautifully written and you described his inner battle so well. Thank you so much for writing and posting this.

Great job :)

beautiful, and amazingly written, well done. ^_^

what a sweet ficlet...luv it..^^

this is wonderful! i love that it's very physical, but at the same time it doesn't seem to focus on that sort of thing at all. VERY nicely done! (and really, who doesn't love some good EdWin lovin'?)

Steamy and adorable at the same time. How do you do it? Awesome story.

Wow...that was amazing. I love the way it was written, going into different aspects of both Ed and Winry- like how she's always hopeful. I also like the little details about why he loves her- it makes it seem real. And the words in italics fit perfectly. Is that a song? I also really like how it went into the details of Ed's sadness, how he views himself and such. Instant favorite. :)

M. I still like this whole whole bunches. M.