I love this game. So much fun. Brilliant job, as always! :)

I LOVED IT! all of it every chapter i could imagine everything! and its true!!... for men its all about the visual and women imagination lots and lots of it!!

i would soo love to see that man shirtless! i can't imagine what abby was thinking when she saw him

You know...it's just too bad there isn't any sequals...because this story was f*ing hot! See, you should at least think about it and then decide...

Oh my god! **fans self** Wonderful!

Perfect as always. I love your work!

Yay for updating "Battle"! My alert notification thingy from fanfiction-dot-net is acting up in a very DiNozzo-like manner, in that it only works when it really, really wants to and that is not often. So I only become aware of some updates if I go through the profiles of the authors I have alerts of one by one.

You did great with this. I didn't find it anticlimatic at all. I was one of the folks who voted for you to finish this, I am glad you did. It is so your version of them, I could see these two running (not walking) straight into a Sir/Little Tease story. Hopefully this cleared up your writers block.

Good ending.. I enjoyed reading this story...

Fantastic! I have been waiting and checking my computer every night for the final part of the story. I never read fic that's in progress but I loved your other stuff so I started this one and then remembered why i don't read stuff that isn't complete, it drives me mad waiting. Totally worth the wait though. As always you are one of the few NCIS fic writers I can read without cringing about characterisation, I just love the way you write these guys. Oh and this is one of the few reviews I've ever written too, so shows how impressed I am. Thanks

BEST. STORY. EVER. LOL -Audacious

WOW! That was insanely hot and so not anti-climatic, so don't worry about that!

I won't lie, this might be my favorite piece by you (sad that it took me forever to catch up), though it's definitely a tough call. Loved it!

FINALLY! I absolutely LOVE it.

Nicely done, thanks for finishing. Your time and art are appreciated.

I am incoherent right now and trying very hard to see my computer screen through the smoke coming off of the computer!

Thank you thank you thank you for writing this and for finishing it. I've loved every damn moment of this story. :D