What an engrossing story! It was almost painful to see them on such a path of destruction. At one point, I'd almost convinced myself to stop reading it (but I couldn't)!! lol.
But really, this was so well written. Loved it.

I just wanted to say I've been slowly reading your stories. If I remember right you did one titled "Saturday School" awhile ago that didn't get finished (If that was WTVOC sorry!)that I started to read and loved the work..but of course I loved SG&TNG and started slowly reading your other stories. I have loved every bit of them. I am sorry I haven't reviewed them all (I suck), but had to let you know. Also, it seems more and more authors are pulling their stories once they are complete, so I have to say thank you for not doing that!

You seriously need to change the summary for this story! I spent months seeing this on peoples favourites and reading the summary and not reading it based on that and then finally gave in and it's brilliant and sad and sweet and lovely and should be read by everyone. Of course your summary really sums up your story but it needs to make people know how lovely it is! Sorry, just can't believe I went this long without reading it. My own fault really, I should look deepr

Thatwas probably the freaking BEST story I have ever read. XD

...rereads chapter 3x...


WOW...That was so amazing. It was sick, twisted, and scary watching them kill each other slowly. They turned their backs on EVERYONE, friends and family.

I do feel bad for Alice. She lose her best friend.

I think if he didn't come back, she would have been better. Maybe weeks, months, or even a year.

I can totally see how you related Twilight and your story together. When Edward took her to the house to vote on her becoming a vamp, she asked asked if he could do that night..

I've read several of your stories and they were simply AWESOME! but this was...WOW!

Oh gosh, I don't see this getting any better. How is she going to go to Bella's wedding? Alice has been through A LOT! I wonder how she'll react...

uh-oh Jacob...

HE'S BACK! IS THIS A GOOD THING??

I hoep its a good thing!! EEPPS!!

ugh...jacob...boo

lol, i heart jakey!

wow...that was so good!

So deep. So good!

they are a very odd couple. i hope she doesn't lose her job.

but its only 3days...not 3 years or months..they must really be addicted to each other...thats scary

I absolutely love the story. Thank you so much for sharing your amazing talent. Keep up the good work, you are a great author. I will keep my eye open for your other works.

Wow.. that was amazing! At first I was really angry at Bella and Edward for their addiction, but you made this work without making me feel disgusted. I enjoyed your story a lot!

I'm glad you wrote this justification. Not that I think you needed to justify this story at all, it was a very interesting justification, and so true. I really, really enjoyed this.

On another note, because I think this fic was so brilliantly written, it pissed me off to see that you wrote, "the epic genius that is Twilight". There is nothing epic or genius about Twilight, and frankly, the writing on this site, most definitely yours included, vastly outshines what SM wrote. Period. I wish such excellent writers such as yourself would stop giving SM so much credit. The only thing she did was give everyone a mediocre starting point. Sorry to leave this review on a low point, but its become a major peeve of mine. Basically, this was my angry, venting way to give you a compliment! lol