 Viktorija 2009-06-25 . chapter 1i so loved it!:)) |
 justafan 2009-06-03 . chapter 1 cute... sort of |
 Anonymous 2009-04-21 . chapter 1 Wow, the ending was practically EXACTLY how I imagined them to get together! I mean, I know they don't in the show or what ever, but that's what creative writing and imaginations are for, right? And you just abosolutely captured their personalities perfect in that last little story bit. I mean, I could totally imagine Derek and Casy talking to each other and acting that way!
AMA-ZING!! *in a sing-songy voice* :) |
 rainbows 2009-03-28 . chapter 1 Fun!
I thought this was a really cute story, and it seemed to fit with the characters actual personalities too
Thanks! |
 Sandalaris 2009-03-25 . chapter 1Aw, that was just too cute. I loved it. XD |
 Lanter 2009-03-25 . chapter 1Very Sweet. |
 Zuzzeroo 2009-03-24 . chapter 1haha loved it |
 Leaf26 2009-03-24 . chapter 1Nice story and nice work! |
 tvFANatic26 2009-03-24 . chapter 1That was amazing! I can definitely imagine the ending. Derek pretending to drunkenly admit his feelings was definitely something I could see him doing! I really loved this one :) They're finding love in college..its practically canon :P |
 HapJap17 2009-03-24 . chapter 1OMG! i love it!
It's so cute. |
 Victorias Twisted Angel 2009-03-24 . chapter 1Aww I love it. Hehe Trashcan bashing always makes me smile.
Victoria |
 Frogster 2009-03-24 . chapter 1Aw, I love that! That was a great idea! Love to see more where that came from! |
 CasualReader 2009-03-24 . chapter 1 This NAILS the characters.
ugh, everything was amazing.
I like the time progression; it makes the whole thing much more realistic :] |
 rumoredreader 2009-03-24 . chapter 1 Aw I got the warm and fuzzies from that one shot... sweeter than an ice cream sunday with two cherries on top! |
 hushhushyou 2009-03-23 . chapter 1I loved this.. It was simply amazing! I love these kinds of stories too. The '4 of this and one of that' or '7 times he didn't and one time he did' whole jive. Those are awesome and I love how you incorporated that into your story! I really like how much Derek was so into Casey from the beginning but it was so subtle. Like you could tell but not because he was all out right and about it but because he kept looking at her or he got mad about something with her and another guy. I loved that. It's like you KNOW he likes her and she obviously likes him but she's kind of oblivious but not really to it hah. And I really just LOVED the Derek in your story. That doesn't happen too much, sometimes people make Derek too lovey dovey or too much of an ** but you.. you made him perfect! Same with Casey. Not many people can get those two and their interactions with each other so much in character but I found that you had no such problem :). Oh and the whole Derek punching Ryan was awesome! You know it totally was for her too! lol. Then the ending was to say the least, amazing! Sometimes I like a story until it gets to the climax where they confess their love or start kissing passionately 'cuz people just get too OOC with it but once again, you did it perfectly! It wasn't too mushy or too.. sexy haha. I loved that they were still teasing and playful even after the confession. Especially my two favorite lines in the end.
“Well, sorry,” she breathes back, “my psychic abilities only work on people with brains, you know.”
^ that was witty on Casey's part! I loved that retort. I could definitely imagine her saying that.
And then
“… So we could’ve been making out three days ago?” He’s glaring at her, now. “You denied me three days worth of make out time?”
^ was HILARIOUS! and everything after that was great too! He wasn't really drunk hehehe :P! Oh Derek, you are so clever!
So once again I absolutely adored and enjoyed this story! Sorry for my long review xD but I just had to explain in detail how lovely this story was! |