 PapillonStar 12/28/01 . chapter 1Wow...now I have to see the picture! This was really good. It's weird when you know what's gonna happen before it does. When Dive goes "Space, stay here..." i got all scared. My only bummer is that you didn't drag the "big scene" out so you could see how everyone else reacted, not just Space. *Sighs* I'm just aseucker for anything between Wing and Dive...Once again, this was great! |
 Dragon Trainer 12/13/01 . chapter 1This is a great story, but a little bit confusing. There was somethings that I just didn't get like whether are not it was all just a nightmare or did it really happen and Nosedive just survived it? IF it is a nightmare, why did Duke have to kill him? Also what brought this dream on in the first place? Well, those are my only questions about this story.
Bye-for-now |