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Wandaang
2009-11-18 . chapter 1
AWESOME!!
Hektols
2009-07-18 . chapter 1
The sequel of that one shot is as good as the original.

The way Hinata comforts Naruto was very touching.

I'm a bit sorry for Sakura, the man she loved becoming an enemy and the one she was developing feelings for finding love with another girl.
Marz09823
2009-07-07 . chapter 1
So far I am enjoying this story a lot ^^ i am a big NaruXHina fan and this is one of my favorite so far keep up the good work
Narxsist
2009-06-15 . chapter 1
Once Again, a most excellent read.

Thank you for the privilege of being able to read such a awesome FF :D

NaRX
Dudtheman
2009-05-23 . chapter 1
good stuff!
elias
2009-04-03 . chapter 1
Great story!
CandyGirl999
2009-04-01 . chapter 1
I just love how you wrote this, it actually seems like something that would happen in the story itself and the NaruHina moments were PERFECT ^_^. Even though I'm a NaruHina shipper I still feel bad for Sakura and what she's going through, but I hate to say it but it's her own fault for waiting to long. But hey that's why she has Lee. (LeeSaku shipper ^_^)
Godschildtweety
2009-03-31 . chapter 1
i love it
superfish01
2009-03-28 . chapter 1
First off a brilliant story. I would also like to disagree and say it was a good ending. Brilliantly written, I'm kinda disappointed that this doesn't have more reviews; it does deserve it.

Also, you said to mention any errors noticed well this is the only passage that I noticed had one.

“Forgiving others for their actions is hard . . . its very hard . . . hating is so much easier . . . it shifts the blame and pain to someone else,”

It should be "...it's very hard..." (apostrophe of contraction between the 'it' and the 's')
Saiyan5Nine-tails
2009-03-26 . chapter 1
The exchange between Naruto and Hinata was very sweet. I liked the idea of Sai doing drawings of Naruto and Hinata. In fact, I've been thinking of a certain scenario where he draws a picture about Naruto and Hinata.
DemiHumanRo
2009-03-25 . chapter 1
dude "let take it slow" and this one is just plain wicked awesome!
Ryuko DragonHalf
2009-03-25 . chapter 1
I am really enjoying these stories! They way you're developing their relationship is almost exactly how I pictured it! I had thought of writing something myself but maybe I shouldn't now.. LOL!

Also, very interesting with Sakura! I wonder how that little snag will be resolved..? I do hope you'll be writing more, but in any case, very well done! :D
Naruto Namikaze Uzumaki
2009-03-24 . chapter 1
nice story i really liked it.
Gravity The Wizard
2009-03-24 . chapter 1
Cool Story!
Kingkakashi
2009-03-24 . chapter 1
This story and ‘Let’s take It Slow’ are two of the most well written stories I've read in a long time. Keep up the amazing work.
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