damn yu ada! DONT RUN!

This is really good so far! (:

But the part I REALLY liked is how she nodded in response to a question she was asked on the phone - and the guy on the other end understood! hahaha.

Other than that, very well written. Keep up the good work! (:

Honestly, you couldnt have written a better ending. It was a close up to the story, yet a whole new opening to what is going to follow. All I ask is: will we see a part 3?

Very interesting turn in the story, I hadn't thought of Ada's help to come from the person it came from.

I guess you've got to do with short reviews and the only one to blame for that is yourself! Dont write so many good cliffhangers and I wouldnt be tempted to just press the next chapter button repeatedly!

Brilliant!

Oh. My. God. mustreadon

I was already wondering how Ada was going to get out of this one. But there you go, if Leon's assumptions are right, Wesker just got his hands in everything.

The talk about Raccoon City and the incidents there was what I liked most of this chapter. its basically what ties both characters together and you manage to show that again and again in just the right places with just the right words.

The best part of this chapter was the dumpster scene. Ada, graceful as a cat and behind her the men crashing everything. It had me smile!

This was an excellent action chapter! I couldnt take my eyes off the screen!

I'm glad I can finally sit down and continue reading your story. And once again you amaze me with your Ada. I swear, you should make her lines for Capcom's games, really!

Oh X3

Aww I didn't want your fic to end yet! I seriously hope that you're considering a "The Butterfly Effect 3"! I liked Ada/Leon's interactions very much; you pinpoint both their personalities with verve and the result is perfect!

Even if the little girl in me is screaming for a Ada/Leon's story dripping with romanticism and passionate kisses, the "grown-up" me favours this kind of fanfics. No happy-end yet, but an opening for what could be between them in the end. (that is percisely why you should do the sequel! :3)

I am utterly speechless concerning Crow's vision of love O_o Honestly, I admire the guy! He's the only one who's not hanging on the past and moves on easily!

Moreover, his meeting with Excella is a briliant idea! The link with RE5 is making me begging for a sequel! Honestly, I want to know Crow's fate! And WHERE THE HELL IS ADA through Re5 events? And Leon?

I must say also that I am very glad to know someone who's writing some Leon/Ada fic without thoroughly hating Claire... After all why should Ada's admirers be Claire's haters (ah yes I know... The fans want Leon for their favourite Re girl :P)

Great work!

(sory four may pitifull english..:P)

Wow, is this gonna be like a tie-in with RE5? :P

Awesome chapter so far. 'Fragile' is also a tie in with RE5.